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AGE: 19
LOC: Barrington, RI
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 16

I love to write, but I rarely feel like I have much that’s good enough to post, which apparently mostly happens when I’ve written something disheartening about love. How peculiar.

I mostly write fantasy. Sometimes I write children’s stories, and occasionally I write about love, a very silly emotion which should be avoided at all costs.

I enjoy theater and those awesome orange juice boxes with the extendable straws.

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Everything between us is fine; As long as he doesn't touch me. I can ignore him, I can forget about him, I can pretend he doesn't exist; As long as he doesn't touch me. Because in those moments, When my rational mind is gone, And all I can do is enjoy the touch, Wish for more, Feel him near me, Wish it meant something with all my heart. In those moments...everything is perfect, And nothing is all right. I pull back and the weakness fades. I am strong. I will resist. I don't want this. Until I...
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Poetry / Sometimes
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Sometimes I wish I wasn't lost.
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Short Story / I Am Immortal
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I sat in confused silence, staring at my desk. All around me were people missing, people who should have been there, who would have been there on any normal Monday. They should have been filling the room with their chatter about upcoming parties and shopping trips. They should have been there, laughing at the thought of death and reveling in their immortality. But they weren’t. And the few who remained said nothing. We sat in silence, desks separated, with not a word to say between us. We cou...
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To love is to court a rocky road, A path which can be both gentle and harsh. At first it winds peacefully, All smooth, polished stone which caresses the bare foot that touches it. It is, of course, a trap, To lure the unwary traveler to trust, To bare all, To make themselves vulnerable. For after all, the sharpest stones lay around the most peaceful corners, Waiting for the unwary, The fools in love who have let their guard slip away. Love, the most cleverly crafted lie, Which lures its prey ...
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What whispering, winding roads we walk.
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I like the way the ink is an after thought. It's a good statement about writing. Certainly true for me anyway, good job.
It's true, although for most that doesn't seem to be too high a price to pay. I'm not really sure about your formatting here. I don't think the ellipse really works for you. It makes it seem like two different thoughts when it really isn't. I don't really consider this a question either, but I think that's more my interpretation of the quote.
Non-fiction / Go for it.
The shuffling takes a moment to comprehend, but it's a pretty good statement about the 'creative life'. It reminds me of all those times I've had the perfect sentence in my head, but as soon as I grab a pen the words shuffle and it's just gone, with only a few leftover words that don't make any sense.
Quotes / Six Word Memoir
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