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AGE: 26
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: May 21

Hello, my name is Tristyn, I am 23, I have two young children, and I work in the medical feild. I have a strong urge to write, and keep writing. Feel free to let me know what you think, be honest, and comment away!!!

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You asked me to come over A great distance too I got lost on the way I was quite upset with you I stood at your door waiting After the first few knocks Then I tried the doorbell You came and knocked me off my socks The neatly pressed suit you wore The red silk tie just right The soft white rose pedals surrounding us All, such a beautiful sight As you led me up the stairs With scented candles lit You asked me to your room With great confidence and whit You sat me down with grace Beside you on ...
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Poetry / A Day to Dream
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Once you and I were one, Some months ago. You and I had formed a bond, This I truly know. Today you took my heart once more, And held it in your hand. Did you know I thought you kept it, Yet how, I don't understand? What is the truth in all of this? Will you stand beside me still? For now I feel you have taken more, Than you thought could ever be real. Am I just a fool who can't see truth? What lies behind those eyes? Do you want of me, what I want of you? Tell me; is this just a selfless dis...
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Poetry / Waiting
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Times have been tough Yet I'm still standing tall Just thinking of you Waiting for your call For another day has begun A new chance at romance Just thinking of you I'm in such a trance So pick up your phone Make that call I'm ready for you I'm ready to fall Take my hand And together we'll run You never know I may be the one
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Lyrics / Singing my Vows
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I want to write this down, On the crevices of your heart. Let you know I’ve been rooting for you From the very first start. I want to give you the love, I’ve carried in my heart. I'm settling down, and marrying you, We'll never be apart. I've always wanted to make this real, You’re always on my mind. I’ve wanted you for so damn long, You’re the one, and one of a kind. I want you with all my heart, I’m glad that you gave in. Told me that you felt the same, And that both of us could win. You kn...
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You asked me over on Easter day, I brought my children along to play. Your son was happy to meet them too, I was so grateful to spend the day with you. We all ate lunch, and met in the yard, You hid all the treats with great regard. You whispered in my ear, where to look, Over on the porch, on the table near the book. I gave you that innocent look and smile, I pranced my way over, like a juvenile. I searched a while and there it was, The curiosity and wonder was torturous. It was a pretty box...
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Haiku/Senryu / LOVE HAIKU
cute! I like it, even though it isn't a genuine haiku
Non-fiction / Human Handbook
I agree with living life to these rules especially #49 and #79, thank you, I believe you have done what you intended, helped someone, ME, out by posting this.
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Haiku/Senryu / Titleless
What is a chinese elm??? get back to me on that one! Without that knowledge this doesn't make sense to me...
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Ok, so there are some editing errors that need to be perked; and in the last like once should be ounce, just to point out how simple it is to make little mistakes... I had to read this aloud to picture this woman; who I actually pictured as a pretty good looking woman in her late 30's with a "Rosanne" Sounding sarcastic voice!!! So I read it as this character. I would love to know what she does next, where it is going... So I will keep posted! Overall it needs some work, but it has great pote...