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AGE: 25
LOC: Woodland, WA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 01

i’m 25 years old, and the most important thing to know about me is that i’m a Jesus freak. i love Jesus and everything about him, and he loves me!!! i’m his princess!!! there is nothing like his presence. i also love reading books and writing (obviously) and i write mainly for teens and children. i work @ a daycare center right now, and currently live with a friend from church. anything else you want to know, just ask!!!

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Non-fiction / My Memoir
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Next stop, Imagination Station!! Let's fly!!
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Non-fiction / Six Word Memoir
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Dark to light, natural to supernatural!!
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Action Adventure / The Path of Destruction
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Alyssa slammed her front door behind her, backpack in hand, as she raced toward her brother’s waiting Ford F-350. She saw his lips moving as he yelled at her, but the roaring sound that filled her ears kept her from hearing him. Dust swirled around her in circles, causing her to cover her mouth and nose as she ran. The air around her had a moist, warm feeling even as a harsh cold wind whipped through the area. Above her, dark clouds had started forming while she and her brother tossed all of...
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Novel Treatments / The Feud Chapter One
by NathanD91
"Sasha and Maryann only defending him. Maverik saying he needed to send Joseph to Military School and Evelynn agreeing. Jason and Erika saying he needed anger management. But Sasha and Maryann trying to win an already won argument." -- this whole paragraph doesn't seem to make sense. the sentences seem like they're incomplete somehow. and when you start out kira's paragraph, u switch tenses. first you say, "Kira sat in her room reading Wicked: The Life and Times of The Wicked Witch of The Wes...
Action Adventure / Loss Of Innocence Chapter 4
by oneshot92
good opening, with describing their new housing. i liked it, although u might want to watch your use of apostrophes. there should be an apostrophe after the "s" in recruits in this sentence: "This room was used to lock up all of the recruits' personal belongings." also, i think you forgot to capitalize the names of the fire base and Desert Storm in the beginning on the 2nd page. it seems to me that Red Cloud is the name of the base, yet you only capitalize it at the heading. and i have never ...
Non-fiction / 6 word memoir
by PIMckenzie
lol i laughed. i couldn't help it. you are so totally right!!! lol great memoir!! this is one I'D definitely choose!!!
Flash Fiction / Six Word Memoir
by campb26593
sounds to me like you're confused about the direction your life is taking and have regretted the directions it has gone in the past! very intriguing to me!! great job!!
Sci Fi & Fantasy / Into The Master's Lair - Chapter Six
by SwordMistress
the dragon!! i love that dragon!! lol i was caught up from the beginning. i didn't feel distracted by anything except the occassional missing word (for example, "She turned faced her cousins." i think u accidentally left out the word 'and'). i think you're doing a great job! i wasn't thrown out of the story hardly at all. your characters feel very real to me. great job!!
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