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LOC: Milwaukee, WI
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LAST LOGIN: November 14
LOC: Milwaukee, WI
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 14
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Oh. I should also probaby note just for “clarity” that this account is not run by Wesley Tank (stumblesome), but by his librarian (bad.habits). I only mention this because I…the librarian, write the reviews on all the work that I read here on Urbis…but all the work that I post on this page belongs to Wes.
Thank you again, wonderful people of Earth. Bless your props.
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100 isolated incidents moving blind through circumstance stood crooked and the voice grows desperate we are not the same thing we are the same we you are not insane if you don't know what to say in the vein a dwarf star, from black earth wet stuff falling onto a hard surface is blood evidence of its mere existence a real roach is inside of the consequence hold onto the volcano and never loosen up your grip and even when the mud is you i see the sentence counting all the years there is no empt...
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hands stand tall out of rocks and the earth moves faster than you can run backwards there is no lights out after the punchline time goes on and flies with the hungry eyes of a ground up rise and fall you will feel what you let yourself feel and compromise what is important for the sake of your hand stand tall by their self out of rocks and nothing else is real except what comes out of your hands when you almost die or yearn to be opposite yourself or pray for hands to root and reach the yearn...
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No more fast food religious experiences its time to become real again even if we get hurt its yours if you want it
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these ones, these ones these wonderful ones one of these wonderful ones is working its wonders on me… touch everything, ghost standing at my windowpane and then I spoke of nothing for the first time I can remember, not even nothing just not even anything at all no, a good man knows when to sleep in his clothes and I took away nothing from the gull of my person but the gently giving gift was there right there above me like a hope that hides inside water and light but its hard ...
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“eagles have trouble exercising their wingspan in empty parking garages like barn swallows pinpointing their frustration in the open country air.” stated in strength on his way back from an impeded procession, ready to sacrifice impatience. the telescope was not meant to be a trademark for microscopic people capturing imperfect interactions with a fleeting precision. his happiness was an avalanche in view of strangers vulnerable to dust because humans in the sky has only rece...
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Cool. This was really lovely. It is very real and genuine. One sentence I think could be worked out if you wanted to display this as anything other than a journal entry is "you want them to see the one for them has been you." I know what you are saying but it took me a couple read thru's to grasp it. You want them to notice that you are the one. The way it is worded here is almost cryptic, like a prophesy. Thanks for sharing.
I enjoyed all of the intense details and rich, colorful descriptions. It was almost too much, though. You have an awesome, clear voice in this piece and your personality is very contagious. It's almost overwhelming.
I am slightly confused by this: "My father was a werewolf.Mom was a carrier of the gene." So both of the parents are werewolves. I can dig. But the way this is worded and set up, I kept thinking you meant to say Grandmother was the carrier, ie that is where your father picked the gene up from. Overall, I give props to you for the female werewolf, who WANTS to be a werewolf. And I love this modern take on the old classic. The textural allergy to precious metals was a nice touch, along with the...
Wow, Impressive. Pulling off a metered rhyme well is not easy! This piece flows very well and the mood is just right. I do think the last line reads a hair long, though and I re-read the end a couple times just to keep the rhythm alive in my head. Great piece. Thank you for sharing!
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