hey matey, I am left unsure as to wether or not you simply left this guy or it is from a 'no longer with us' type of projected perspective. I am guessing that you were the female half of this forgotten partnership as 'your love' howling at the moon seems to create an angrily depressed masculine hairy werewolf of a man, a saddened brute or a painfully regretful man howling and wishing you back. On an entry level I put together that possibly this guy messed up his relationship with you, and bec...

Sometimes i love sleep this much too. Sometimes when I've been up for 36 hours + and starting to get a little bit (madeup word>>>) 'twinkly brained' your eyes focus focus on random things for a while and you find yourself staring at a crack in the wall or something for like 10 minutes then you go "hey, what the, why was i, oh forget it, go to sleep", but you cant, your overtired, your over the edge your past it you lay down and close your eyes, and you see coulouful kaledoscope spira...

Surreal, engaging and thought provoking, I had to read this work through a few times to get a good kind of grip of it... or atleast how I have interpreted it. I do get a feeling of an ethereal nomad, maybe a metaphor of an emotional 'entity' or being... which way to go? which direction? which path in life? each of them 'full ripe' and the 'pulling' from all 'sides', seems to reinforce (atleast to me) the character is at a crossroads in life, a kind of fork in the road. Then the 'fifth corner'...

creepy. potent words. dunno what to say. I think you could make this into a pretty eerie and powerful piece. ripping childhood is not nice. must be personal. sorry i couldnt be much more help ^^,

I'm a bit nocturnal too, if I'm not working I stay awake then sleep in and a few days later all of a sudden your waking up at 6pm and going to sleep at 10am the next day. some times I wander around suburbs i nvr been before and walk around, just seeing what i stumble on. I'm not a drug dealer hustler character though like it seems this 'lies by night to day' dude. it is lies as in telling mistruths or lies as in lay down? as inn talking lies all night, a sinner, a serpent a slimy snake in a s...

sorry, im not sure why you requested me to review this because I am a very long way away from interpreting it. Just me but seems like a bunch of words put together, some chocolate vs vanilla, love vs lust maybe i dunno This poem went straight over my head, sorry, sounds good though ^^, kinda

seems that every1 that has been requesting reviews off of me hasn't even unlocked them 2-3 weeks later, I'm not sure why you requested me either but anyway... poem seems cool, a few spelling mistakes in the last but thats not so important, uh it is hard to find yourself, and i don't think many people ever do... but if someone told you which path to take it wouldn't be fun! take it easy all the best ^^,

not sure why yourequested me to review this as all the 'strangers' that request reviews seem to of not unlocked them 2-3 weeks later. anyway, i think this poem needs a bit more work to make it fow a bit easier, the last line in each paragraph clunks along like a square wheel. you use alot of big descriptive words to explain not alot, sorry for being harsh, i just personally think this poem is not very good. but thats just me, 1000 000 others could like it, but then again, who cares what other...