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AGE: 22
LOC: Orange, TX
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: January 01

I’m 20 and from texas. I’ve been overcoming my terminal laziness and actually doing as much as I can with myself as well as I can. Guitar has been my fix lately.
Might write more soon.
Might post more soon.
Keep your eyes peeled, aite?

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Sci Fi & Fantasy / The quest for another
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Capiella said to herself, "I must be lost again". She had been wandering for days, as usual. Rain was beginning to fall, which was normally a welcome occurance, but there was no shelter to be found anywhere. According to her map, a town should be nearby. From what she remembered, it was one of the towns that the regional tribes had been at war with. Rumor had it that the town had been deserted around five years ago. Rain was beginning to soak her long, brown hair through her red hood, turned...
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Novel Treatments / Small Town Inertia
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Fist Fist Fist Foot Fist Something blunt Foot Elbow? Knee? He was too deeply bruised and his skin throbbed too numbly for him to be sure. It didn't matter. He had lost bar fights before. If you lose to an asshole, this is how things are before everything fades to black and you wake up in the back of a police station, or if they're a real asshole, a hospital. Les couldn't hold his arms up to block any more punches or kicks. His arms hurt worse than the rest of him did, and he could feel his bo...
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Novel Treatments / The quest for another ch3
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Nosy slept deeply until sunrise, when she heard the dragging footsteps of several men. She awakened, instantly startled, but very curious. She walked cautiously to the doorway of the hut she was hiding in, stepping over the rabbit's leg bone. When she peered outside, no one was in sight, and she thought she might have been hearing things. Was it only a nightmare? And then to her left, meandering toward the street, she saw a skeleton shuffling along. It was hissing, trying to walk along with ...
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Novel Treatments / The Quest For Another ch3
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Nosy slept deeply until sunrise, when she heard the dragging footsteps of several men. She awakened, instantly startled, but very curious. She walked cautiously to the doorway of the hut she was hiding in, stepping over the rabbit's leg bone. When she peered outside, no one was in sight, and she thought she might have been hearing things. Was it only a nightmare? And then to her left, meandering toward the street, she saw a skeleton shuffling along. It was hissing, trying to walk along with ...
Novel Treatments / Planet Dave ch1
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On December 8th, 1981, a bright yellow planet is conceived. From the same nebula it's relatively nearby sun was spawned, it begins as a massive chunk of molten rock approximately 25,000 miles in circumference, and is subject to constant eruptions. The sun's rays beat violently on it's surface, and the heat of the place keeps water from settling in any quantity. Eventually, over billions of years, the surface of the planet cools, and after an ultrasound to determine it's gender, the sun affec...
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Short Story / blaze
It's a little choppy, and there's nothing wrong with that. Fixing choppiness is as easy as reading it outloud every now and then and changing the wording wherever it sounds weird. The second paragraph seems to have happened before the first, like a flashback or something. Making the flashback past tense would be a good idea. I was confused for a sec. Also, some setting detail early on would help the reader understand that the house is off in the boonies, and that no one can hear her screaming...
Short Story / Margorie
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Non-fiction / How to Review a Poem
I agree with half and disagree with half. Personally, I read through once, and if it's good I read through a second time. I usually can't help but note bad spelling and those boggy spots that suck a persons eyeballs in like quicksand. Complementing automatically is for the birds. Stroking egos isn't my business, unless they need to be stroked. I prefer to make constructive suggestions.
Poetry / Humor
Heh, wand in the derriere? Ouch. It reminds me of an excerpt from Choke by Palahniuk. He talks about how you only suffer when you choose to. If you wanted, you could learn to grin your way through just about anything. Maybe the perspective in this piece is just someone who really enjoys watching twisted stuff happen. I give it a 6 because it's entertaining, but it didn't make me crack up.
Novel Treatments / Terra Nullius
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