A very well written piece! I love the synesthesia (I dont believe I've seen anyone else on urbis use that technique) Good work and good luck!

Good work, that will describe - and, thus, relate to many users on Urbis. I would change the grammar slightly, though, so that it reads better. I'd make it: "Young, passionate... Soon to be discovered" Or something like that Good work and good luck!

Haha why not do both? That's what I'm doing. I play bass and am writing a novel AND studying psychology and lit at uni AND working two part-time jobs =P There's always room for another great love. However, I can see where your piece is coming from. Good work and good luck

A great entry! You've put into words something I've been trying to for a long time and done it better than I ever could! Great work and good luck with the competition!

The main aim of this competition is to get as much meaning out of the 6 words as possible so I'd suggest that words such as "I'm" and "an" should be avoided. Also, is it just me or do hyphenated words seem like a bit of a cheat =P (I'm not saying it IS cheating, just that it seems like it) But, other than that, not a bad piece. However, I think that, to win this competition, it'll have to be great. Good work and good luck though!

So true!! A writer's work is their life in so many ways. Writers will pour their heart and soul into their writing - both in the effort they give and the content they cover. Also, many writers will write based on their life or their desired life; a writer will rarely write about a topic of which they have no experience what so ever. A great entry! Good work and good luck!

Haha I do like this one for some reason. It's very simple and unassuming but it has a great cynicism or sarcasm about it. And it's so true; dont we all. Good work and good luck!

This is an interesting idea, reasonably unique entry and your meaning is very clear. However, I'm not sure I really like the meaning because you're implying that you only put into words what your heart can't hold. In contrast, most writers will put their entire heart and soul into words. So, although I understand what you mean, this piece makes it sound like you're being very stingey with your writing. However, as I said, its not, by any means, a bad piece. Good work and good luck!

I'm not sure I really get your meaning. It seems like a joke that only a select few would get and, as such, won't seem funny to most. Also, you may want to actually enter it in the memoir competition. All of that being said, chances are pretty good that I just don't understand it because I haven't read widely enough. I say this because it seems like a very high-brow joke (high intellegence). And the words you've chosen are chosen well; they make the piece feel longer that 6 words. Apparent le...

Hmm, I'm not entirely sure what you mean by this piece and the only link I can see is the mention of heaven, used as a simile. I don't know if you're implying (I'm going mostly off the "religion vs. me" title here) that you don't really see the importance of religion as you use a word that's so recognisably religious as nothing more than a simile to describe the taste of something you ate. But that's about the only meaning I can personally glean from it. Also, I'd reconsider the "Ate out Love...