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AGE: 21
LOC: Newark, DE
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 23

Id like to take someones time up with my writing and i can only get better, and need as much feedback as i can handle, ill put the strangest and nonunderstandable of moments into words for you

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No time to walk no time to run got time to crawl but it aint much fun it doesnt meen that, you couldnt be there just wastin time overneath the sun   Brought time to halt, brought time to spin with the deserts call trying to begin and all thats heated, not quite mistreated standing on the inside looking in   So the night starts to fall giving me that indignation that we both delay im breathing out your breathing in giving me a debt that cant be repayed   And as the sun gree...
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Where the night rolls in is where ill start how irritating the noise can be now not ever where it wants complaints but another can be so good to that other part the part you can see and feel next to, hear out under and around you keep acknowledging well your here, they are there they shine in your head an upward glance at streetlights maybe a grin for better parts of the reflection a steady pace gliding through black but serene from high strung tendencies and this is my night all too mine and...
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may liars be your witness as another night by the windowsill awaits conjure her being within mind and wisk away with the essence a raptureous breeze blind as the faith you believe lay still upon your face cold but still warm on the inside retracing what led you to this in most parts needed it gives no chance imparticular would rather not be called a hypocrit so you sit in solitude waiting for that one single moment where it just might be mistaken for a feeling so singled and when yo...
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may the sunrise grace you beautiful the first rays upon your face and if i could see it right now and be in your general space id do anythin you please whatever comes to your mind youd never doubt a second maybe make you forget about time and then when your good and ready ill make everything complete turn your isnides outward fulfilling the last and final need now that your good and satisfied we can take time to embrace the feel and as your shoulder starts to turn its realized that ...
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Poetry / surrounded
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A sound a place a scent a being how easily placed in the mind no intentions for the vernacular no scheduled dues to view horizontal abundance of static through the line short distance of breath to frost internal affairs, open book creativity burn amongst we dine per chance youd jump the top floor as well the most exhilarating with nothing but consequence as a reward  
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Locked
comforting but tragic, i like the essence of family and how close her relationship is with her father
very elemental really gives me a grasp of earth tone homage
i can relate to this (not in any other sense but the childrens) and its a beautiful piece of work
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