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AGE:
23
LOC: Bristol, TN
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 15
LOC: Bristol, TN
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 15
The world is out of our hands. You can’t change what already happened, and you can’t change what’s happening at this second. But you can change what happens the next second
Have you ever really looked at peoples eyes. Rarely can people hide things that flash in your eyes. even for a second you can find the real them just by watching their eyes.
I like relationships, I mean I like to write them. I love to try and describe what happens between two people. I rarely do well but practice makes perfect!
I’m funny, I’m charming, unless I’m in a bad mood, but that’s beside the point. I like to debate, and I love to discuss. Talk to me, you’ll remember it for a while I promise!
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Her heart was beating ten times faster then normal and the thumping was filling her brain. The room was dark, the only light streaming in from the window behind him, casting his face in shadows. The carpet under her feet was rough, and she wished that she had thought to put her shoes back on when she had stood up. They were still leaning on each other under her desk back when she had still cared about them. Now she was focused on the shadow in front of her. “Is what their saying true?” His vo...
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Some times I don't think I exist out side of words I live through the words I put in a computer. or write on a piece of note book paper Sometimes I make a mistake and call my self by the name of a character Words define us, they make us who we are A friends words can life you up and enemies can bring you down a cute boys could make your heart race A strangers can change your day An authors job is to tell a story catching you up in words and weaving them around you until your lost in a differe...
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CHAPTER 2 Brothers and Injury Mia woke up early the next morning, even earlier then usual. She took a quick shower and stopped; standing in front of her closed in nothing but her underwear and bra, and quickly tried to decide what to wear. She could wear what she would normally wear and not worry about anything. But now she had a date with the hottest boy in the school. Could she wear normal clothes? He liked you yesterday in normal clothes. The little voice in her head screamed. Yeah, but no...
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CHAPTER 2 Brothers and Injury Mia woke up early the next morning, even earlier then usual. She took a who saw you. Why didn’t you just stay up there?” “I didn’t want to. Dramatic exits are a lot more fun.” Chris laughed and for a moment they sat and looked out at the sun rise. Colors were bouncing off the leaves creating an almost heavenly aura around the forest. There were the distinct noises of their mom starting breakfast in the kitchen and the sounds upstairs of people fighting for the ba...
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Version 2
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She took off through the cafeteria, pushing behind a door to the kitchen area. Chairs were stacked against the walls, which made it easier, even though she had to dart around the tables to get to the other side of the giant room. She took careful notice of what looked like a mashed up burger from lunch, and didn't even notice that she was stepping in day old ketchup. Red foot steps followed behind her. Banging through the doors Mia darted into a dark hallway that she knew was next to the stag...
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I loved this piece! I related to it very well, that feeling that I still love my ex no matter how stupid it is. You did a good job portraying that feeling that you want to kill yourself for loving him, but not being able to give it up. The dreaming part was actually surprising. Usually those things are rather predictable but this one wan't nearly as tedious. I think because you waited for them to kiss instead of the ususal wake up right before. Over All good job and congrats on a good piece
I liked this story, and I'm hoping you post more. Though now I really want an angel devil tattoo, but that will pass I'm sure. You created a good story, especially not over describing the girls in the club. Sometimes people over describe, so it's a plus that we don't have to wade through paragraphs of description. I especially loved the last part. That line is a keeper! Good luck!
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I got to say, you did a good job pulling people in. Especially with such odd names, I was interested before reading. It's a typical love story, but love stories are always nice, and you put in a nice twist with the name thing. Though I was a little nervous about the stuff with his loves body I was worried about it being icky or something. Overall it was an interesting read, and I"m glad I got the chance this
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