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"saying the wrong thing HAT would Todd off again" - HAT = THAT perhaps ;P Not bad :) It has got me hooked though, I look forward to see where this has gone. Apart from the spelling mistake I have pointed out, there really is nothing wrong with it :), keep writing dude, i love it ;)

My apologies for the review on chapter two about the coma thing, I forgot to read the little prologue bits, this is VERY interesting, she's died and gone into another kind of realm, I like this a lot dude. I didnt even realise that she had died, you did that in a very good way. Some impressive writing here. A very good third chapter I hope you keep writing this. This has been a favourite story of mine and there's nothing that I can point out to change or anything like that. I look forward to ...

again very good imagery here, not quite sure what was going on how she got from lying on the street to eating people, is she in a coma? :) I want to keep reading, this is a very good story so far I cannot put it down! Very good second chapter, I look forward to reading the third

well ill start by summing it up with a word..."Wow" What a gripping first chapter to this unbelievable story. Usually I couldn't raed horror because i get the creeps, but this is fantastic. You have the right choice of adjectives which gives a clear image in my mind, especially of the hooded figure that ends up on top of Nikki. Also, great name for a dog "Midnight", gives a REALLY good idea as to how black this Labrador's fur really is. I can't wait to read chapters 2 and 3 which i will be do...

This is a good letter, it's brief and to the point which is everything you want if you're writing to somewhere as big as this. You give a very good idea of your background and why you definitely should have your novel published. Obviously like you said you'll have your personal details at the top of the letter followed by all that is necessary at the bottom of the letters. But yes, on the whole this is a good letter, good luck and i hope your novel gets published :)