I gae this a sevon because I am very partial to stories of this kind. I enjoy these future earth stories with a possible post-apocolyptic feel. I would say that it is a good start, but more detail would be good. Perhaps you are going to get to that. Some ideas about why the planet is what it is. Also more character development. Who is Gavin, who is the girl you mentioned? Does the thin asian man know him? Is he friend or foe? Just with these elements you have the makings of an excellent thril...

I was kind of into this, but then the twist hooked me with te whole poison apple thing. Nice twist! I would only suggest that you proofread and watch for grammar mistakes and spelling. I would also say that some more character detail would be good. You did well with it as a start, but some more development would be an excellent way to not only introduce the characters more to the reader, but it is also a way to develope later plotlines with the same characters, or bring a new character into t...

Very graphic and intense. I like how you gave both points of view, the girl in the bed and the man in the hall. There is not much I can say to critisize this in any way, it was well written. Perhaps the only thing is a more deffinate line between what the gril is thinking and what the man is thinking. Wonderfully written piece, thank you for sharing it with us.

It is indeed flash fiction. This is a style of writing that I too utilize quite often and do enjoy reading. It is like a glimpse into someone's life or the lives of a few for just a moment. I will say that perhaps some more description would be good, what the characters look like, the environment that sort of thing. You can do these and still make it short and sweet. I would say keep working on it, but it certainly has potential. By the way, what is in the glovebox?

I like you passion about this subject, it is hard not to fele that in your words. I would however maybe refine it and put in some specific reasons and examples of the mistreatment of the vets of this war. If you mention Vietnam to someone not from that era they may not know how it really felt. Anyone can say war is terrible, but unless you have actually been there it is hard to grasp.

A well written work that I would not really classidy as journalism. It is descriptive, it has a flow, but it lacks the facts and frankness of journalism. I would perhaps put it under short non-fiction, or maybe flash-fiction, but that may be a bit of a stretch. Aside from that good work

The blood soaked sands of time once again run red. - This was my favorite here I believe. I am a sucker for quotes. I always like to read someone else's mind and quotes were invented for just that purpose I believe. Good work, I would be intrigued to peruse the novel

I would say that this is really well written, the flow is perfect, and the description is not bogging it down in any way. I would probably reclassify it though. There is no hook, or twist at the end to leave the reader wanting more. Flash is supposed to grab someone and make them wonder or perhaps even shock a little. Well written pieve though, keep up the good work

This was a very intense piece and very much the definition of flash fiction. I enjoyed the images it conveyed, the only thing I would do is make it more clear who the characters are. They need a little refinement to make the reader understand better.

I enjoyed this piece on a whole, but I would revise it carefully and do a re-write. There are multiple spelling and clerical errors. I personally wanted a little explanation on who the four characters were. Could the "regular" people see them or not? It has potential, but it needs some serious polishing. I can see that you are learned though and have a talent, just hone it and it could work very well for you.