SineadHolmes19's profile
AGE:
20
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: December 22
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: December 22
Hi im Sinead, i’ve created this account in the hope of being able to put some of my poetry out there and gain feedback from anyone really :-) let me know what you think xx
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I lost my mind in a house called heaven, you were there and we shut out the world, you stole my soul, in a house called heaven and i let you 'cos i was your girl. Behind those doors, the light was dim and a musty smell hung in the air reality was left behind and we never even cared. That house was really something, 'cos no one else could see how nothing really mattered 'cos that house had you and me. I fell in love in a house called heaven and its there when i close my eyes, I realised s...
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I lost my mind in a house called heaven, you were there and we shut out the world, you stole my soul, in a house called heaven and i let you 'cos i was your girl. Behind those doors, the light was dim and a musty smell hung in the air reality was left behind and we never even cared. That house was really something, 'cos no one else could see how nothing really mattered 'cos that house had you and me. I fell in love in a house called heaven and its there when i close my eyes, I realised s...
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I saw him in the distance, staring with intent in my direction as the endless ocean roared harsh and unspoken words behind him. He is like a painting. A story only half written. A rumour that may or may not be true. As he came closer I opened my mouth to speak only to choke on my own words. Once again left unspoken. A silent moment of understanding passed between us and as i turned and walked away I regretted the gentleness of his touch. I'd rather die in his hands than spend forever remember...
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Society takes life for granted, and its morals are generally flawed, no questions asked and eyes glued shut, nobody cares anymore. Not that they did in the first place, history just repeats, going round and round in circles, like we've all just addmitted defeat. How's this allowed to continue when deep down we know that its wrong? Going against what we really believe, doing all that we can to belong. Its like you never met yourself and you're taken in by the lies, falling deeper and deerper i...
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i like this poem because it makes a genuine point and one that rings true with me at this point in my life. Its obvious that a lot of thought went into it. well done.
really good lyrics, makes a nice change from the obvious romance and heartbreak lyrics you see so often. Although i think that maybe a bit more thought could go into some of the lines just to make them flow a bit better. Good work though :)
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