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LAST LOGIN: July 29
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 29
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Hey, you stop that. Stop now.
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I wanted looks, fame, and fortune.
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They called her little bunny foo foo, among other things; she hated that name, and that song. She hated every one of them too, every single sixth-grader at her school, because they all hated her. If they would just leave her alone, everything would be fine. The kids never left Jenna alone, they would follow her on the playground, they would pass by her and throw things at her during lunch, and they would pass hurtful notes to her in class. The harassment never stopped. Now they even began cal...
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They called her little bunny foo foo, among other things; she hated that name, and that song. She hated every one of them too, every single sixth-grader at her school, because they all hated her. If they would just leave her alone, everything would be fine. The kids never left Jenna alone, they would follow her on the playground, they would pass by her and throw things at her during lunch, and they would pass hurtful notes to her in class. The harassment never stopped. Now they even began cal...
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4 Comments
They called her little bunny foo foo, among other things; she hated that name, and that song. She hated every one of them too, every single sixth-grader at her school, because they all hated her. If they would just leave her alone, everything would be fine. The kids never left Jenna alone, they would follow her on the playground, they would pass by her and throw things at her during lunch, and they would pass hurtful notes to her in class. The harassment never stopped. Now they even began cal...
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It flowed well and had good rythm. Kinda sad. I wouldn't have called this humorous, you must have been shooting for satire. I hope this is more of a fictional story in your life. Nicely done. Keep up the good work.
Ha! emo people. You're probably right. You silly goose. Nice work. Very funny.
No normal sister would utter that her sister has a "smokin body." She would have put it in lesser terms, I think anyway. Guess its possible she has a crush on her own sister. We're inside Blair's head, she wouldn't keep calling her Taylor Delilah, even if this is a romance novel and that is a really pretty name. Again with the full name, ya gotta not do that. You keep changing POV, that's ok, but might be stronger if you stay inside one head for a bit longer. Doesn't Avery know that her best ...
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