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AGE: 20
LOC: Anderson, IN
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 19

I am an aspiring writer of a few things, I appreciate the darker side of life. The violence, the chaos, the mayhem. But the lighter side of things have a certain finesse that just seems to reach out and smack me across the face. I am not normal by any standard but at least it makes my stories interesting to delve into… hehe My friends call me Shadow but my real name is Timothy, or Allen if you don’t mind. I need more material to read so don’t hesitate to send a review request on ANYTHING you many to post.

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Poetry / Gemini
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12 Reviews   4 Comments
Gemini, The Dark and Light. One has logic one has Might. In the Sun we have one form, but in the Moon we are the Children of the Corn. The Twins without two separate bodies, one burns the midnight oil, the other, karate. The Dark and the Light, the Sun and the Moonlight. The brawn and the brain, we will always walk as our own cane. When we look around and show what we see, we divide and conquer so unnaturally. Too much brawn or too much brain, with this combination we will always be sane. So ...
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Poetry / Anguish
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12 Reviews   12 Comments
I awoke this morning hating myself, berating myself for getting this way. I come in the morning and try to help out, all anyone ever does is shout. I look into the crowd and what do I see, everyone always just looking down on me. I keep staring down the pathway into the light never able to reach what is just in my sight. Running and screaming I feel my heart beat, the anguish I sense is searing with heat. I just love how people don't care what you do, how you're always wrong and never right, ...
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Poetry / The Unbound Mind
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12 Reviews   2 Comments
The unbound mind will go on and on forever to never end its search for knowledge or power. The very thing that it thrives on is the inability to be leashed. In 18 years I have yet to learn the very way to tame and leash the unbound mind to the eternal spirit. Some people say that you can only think as far as you can see but others agree to the point of never giving ends. You see a star, but some see a possibility many expeditions; a cloud, others may see a shape. When you look beyond the dept...
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13 Reviews   3 Comments
When you look into your lover's eyes what do you see? What I see is my lover's heart staring back at me. I see the pain that she has foregone and the happiness that i bring. I see the very emotions I long to feel. I only hope that she could see the same, my heart, emotions, and pure joy from our presence together. A wise man once told me that the eyes are the windows into the soul and it took me forever to understand what he meant. When you truly love a person, then you will feel and see it ...
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Poetry / The Unbound Mind
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9 Reviews   0 Comments
The unbound mind will go on and on forever not to ever end its search for knowledge or power. The very thing that it thrives on is the inability to leash it. In 18 years i have yet to learn the very way to tame the unbound mind to the eternal spirit. Some people say that you can only think as far as you can see but others agree to the point of never giving ends. You see a star, but some see a possibility of another life form, a cloud, others may see a shape. When you look beyond the depths of...
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Novel Treatments / 100 Days To Die
I like this how death has taken on a new appearance instead of the usual black cloaked skeleton. Death being a woman is definitely new. I know I would read more if there is something else posted, so keep it up. The satire is definitely funny, such as this man being up with "greats" by dying young. And on the note of it being British english, I prefer it that way. British english flows better than US English does.
Poetry / Truth
I believe that this is well written and conveys the truth in less words than most people need. I like how you convey the truth about how truth hurts and everything. It is short sweet and to the point and that is how it needs to be.
Sci Fi & Fantasy / Underland: The Dark Reign
Intriguing, holds interest well, and follows through on the same level. The crown, this is the only thing that doesn't have a definite meaning to it. I mean what is it for, this is kinda left out. I liked it very well. Maybe a little different on the fight scene, the whole impervious to projectiles is too much like superman, but the watch was a nice touch.
I think the title of this poem should be more "You're The Only One That Sees". It is a painful poem and it's true but we both know that I know that. I think this is more about telling me how no one else sees everything that I see and you want other people to know this is a problem, Good luck, Much Love.
Young Adult / Winterhaven - Arrival
I like how this goes, I thought it was just going to be a story about female friends and their mishaps but by the sounds of it, this is a vampire/ werewolf novel. Great surprise I think anyway.