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AGE:
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LOC: Saint Paul, MN
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 30
LOC: Saint Paul, MN
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 30
I’m a 19 years young eritrean chica that fell in love with poetry along the way.
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Darkness all around. My feet chained to the ground. I can see the earth crumble but the lone star illuminates through the rubble. Brightness blaring. Screamin' but no one hears her yelling. They say "life gets hard", who you telling? She is all alone in this cold and lonely world. Praying for the coming but her cries go unheard. Just like her. Unknown & yet she is known. Cuz of her poetic ways... well (pause) at least that's what they say. God's gift from above, sent to her from a place of lo...
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I was in a daze when I met this man. Knees so weak that I couldn't stand. Thought he was gonna say any sweet line to get these panties on the floor but that wasn't his plan. I was ready, words aimed to fire at his ego and diss any thought of his to caress. But he opened his mouth and uttered the sweetest sounding melody to my heart. I started blushing and turning red. I ain't even white but I'm sure it showed. And I was so ready to put up this fight. All he did was ask my name and it turned i...
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I was in a daze when I met this man. Knees so weak that I couldn't stand. Thought he was gonna say any sweet line to get these panties on the floor but that wasn't his plan. I was ready, words aimed to fire at his ego and diss any thought of his to caress. But he opened his mouth and uttered the sweetest sounding melody to my heart. I started blushing and turning red. I ain't even white but I'm sure it showed. And I was so ready to put up this fight. All he did was ask my name and it turned i...
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The story unfolds, of a young girl. 11 years young, She learned to take shots of straight rum. Smoke dope 'til her heart was wasted. Simply another teen in this millennium tryna be something they weren't 'til she found her spoken word and got messed up in the herb. All over again, she had to find her own trend and choose the other way. Find her soul she chose, through poetry. She found her heart beats in the midst of the night. Where no one lurks, she harks a fairytale of her own through this...
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Very good job! I agree! but we can all find the way..we just have to look within ourselves.
I loved this poem. What I really liked about it was the structure, and how you used paranthesis to describe it more. I think that you can get far. The only thing I will have to say is that in the beg. it was a little confusing for me. But with the personality I have, that just made me want to read it more so I could understand it more. I have my own understanding of what you're talking about, I'm just not sure if its what you wanted to put across. Who knows though. Overall, good job.
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