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AGE:
23
LOC: San Jose, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 16
LOC: San Jose, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 16
Well I’m currently attending San Jose State and studying creative writing. I’ve alway had a deep passion for writing. I remember when was child, during recess while all the other kids played dodge ball, four square,or basketball i was writing stories in my journal. You can say, i had a very creative imagination and still do. Some of my other hobbies are skiing, bowling, indoor soccer and hiking. Well uhmm that just a little about myself.
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monday morning coffee off to work driving on top of the person in front of me only seems to make me go slower i want to yell and scream at the person in front of me for driving so damn slow but instead i turn up the music and sing the song goes on in my head for the rest of the day it gets stuck there and again im frustrated i have no time to even stop to think of a new song to sing inside my head and when i finally do find the time to do what it is i wanted to do i find that I am too tired t...
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I really enjoyed reading this short story. I like the angle you took with the vampire's narrative. It shows how the vamper lives out his day to day life. Or should i say night to night life. I couldn't help to feel sad for the vampire instead of being scared of him. I guess it's hard in the every day life of vampire. While reading towards the end of the story it seemed pretty obvious that the vampire was heading towards a classic Buffy the Vampire Slayer trap. All in all good story a little r...
I really enjoyed reading this short story. The story flowed very smoothly without many rough packs in the story. I liked how you used short dialog and long narrative through out the story. I just wish you were more descriptive of they way Jonah's garden look. If working in Jonah's garden had such a major impact in the characters life, i think the garden should stand out more to the readers. All in all it was a great short story and i think you should get it published. Goodluck on your endeavo...
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