AGE:
38
LOC: Caldwell, ID
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 23
LOC: Caldwell, ID
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 23
I write words.
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Version 2
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Singular But not the same. Your expansion is your own- My rate is not altered. One is not greater Nor is one less- We expand Into and out of Eachother. My vision is my own- No two see the same. We are one- Divinely entangled. Creating with our being- Being what we create. We are not the same- My expansion is my own. We are one.
Version 1
3 Reviews
1 Comment
I love you, we are not the same; Your expansion is your own- My rate is not altered. You are not greater, Nor are you less. We expand Into Out of Eachother. My vision is my own, No two see the same. Still- We are one. Quantum entanglement, Ebb and flow; Creating with our Being, Being what we Create. We are not the same, I love you. My expansion is my own- We are one.
Version 1
3 Reviews
3 Comments
So fucking clueless and deaf and narrow and you have no idea who I am or what I want or what I think or just how fucking angry I am at this pitiful existence that we have or how I hunger for a different meat; sweeter and neater and brighter and tighter or how I want to screeeeeaaaam until my arteries burst and my blood explodes to the floor for all the common fools to walk through and maybe then, on the soles of their feet, I can leave here to another place where it’s not such a fight, ...
Version 1
4 Reviews
5 Comments
So you’re standing at the kitchen counter at 9 o’clock at night making peanut butter and jelly sandwiches for the kids you haven’t fed because what you tried to make for dinner that was good for them to eat didn’t cook right and you hate the way the deviled eggs turned out and your youngest fell asleep waiting for the food to get done but didn’t bother to take of his clothes or go to the bathroom so he peed on the brand new futon mattress that you just bought whi...
Version 1
3 Reviews
1 Comment
I hear the screaming of my passion as it lies in it’s blood, passing, making way for the sticky, sappy ooze of you and how you chase away the shadows of my distinction and slay the sweet melancholy oils with which I paint so that my brush waits in silence while I go about sniffing roses like some damned fool school girl longing for your kiss and writing sonnets to your eyes and I see the melting of my individual wax running down the side of you in beads to cool into some hard, new shape...
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The irony in this is fabulous! Worst thing is- I think I've actually said something like this! LOL!
Ooooooo! You sneak in with the creepy! I was surprised and so I was delighted. You dialogue was smooth and natural; thought we were headed a completely different direction! If all flash fiction did the job this well, I would read more of it!
The work is consistent, the story unfolds and develops at an even pace. The description is clear without seeming forced, a rare thing it seems. There is an exciting contrast in the way you describe her as amistress of death but in all light terms, using the dark description for yourself. Refreshing that it is her that is light when so many make the role a dark one. I think that saves this piece from being like a million others. I enjoyed the twist.
I feel pretty bad costing you credits to tell you that I think the work is solid and that I like it. The first 4 lines are what did it. After reading them, you had me hook, line and sinker. The line about the chances is beautiful and I love the pie part. The word usage throughout is satisfying lends the apropriate amount of eloquence without sounding pretentious. It is a comely piece.
I liked it but of course I am partial to the method, LOL. I think that time perfects the method and this will be a powerful outlet for you. A million snobs will tell it's rubbish and I will tell you that the truth in your words and method are worth far more than their pretense.
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