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AGE: 23
LOC: Tuckerton, NJ
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 15

My name is Rachel, and I’ve wanted to be a novelist since as long as I can remember.
Right now I’m 19 and have a son… I’m selling cars for a living, but it’s not my passion. One day, you’ll see my name on hte New York Time’s Best Seller’s List.
Right now, I’m busy between being a working girl, a mom, and a crazy teenager at times. I love to travel… I prefer the beach and/or city at all times… I cant stand being in small hick towns or in the middle of nowhere. I often need to be around a lot of people, choas, and noise. Nothing makes me feel safer.

What do I like to write about? Music is my inspiration for just about everything. Often in my work (Especially Garage Band Anthems) I’ll make references to my favorite bands, and …

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Novel Treatments / Garage Band Anthems Ch2
Version 1
18 Reviews   5 Comments
“I don’t think this is coming out of the ground, man,” Blake insisted. He put his might and fury into the task, pulling the metal pole, trying to free it from the ground. I was smoking a cigarette, conscious of the neighbors spying form their windows. “Did you try just pulling the actual sign from the pole?” In the midst of a light drizzle, Blake gave me a tired look. He leaned on the sign with one arm, and motioned for a drag of my cigarette. I handed it to him, and shoved my hands in my po...
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Novel Treatments / Garage Band Anthems
Version 1
9 Reviews   0 Comments
Being alone isn’t something I’ve ever handled well… and come to think of it, it’d never been a problem until two weeks after Blake’s latest absconding. If idle hands are the devil’s workshop, one can only imagine what works could be done with a hollow heart. Rotting away in my room, with only the company of my bass guitar, I had quickly forgotten how it felt to reign over the word – to own it. In two weeks’ time, I had switched gears – spun a web of depression I had no idea how to pull mysel...
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Novel Treatments / A Deities Deception (Ch3)
what a clever little tale you have here. The introduction is the perfect way of opening this scene, and the closing wraps it up nicely. I'm a stickler about summing up a story/chapter... it has to be perfect. It all fits and flows nicely. As for the dialouge, it's pretty believable and real.
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the second verse is beautiful. this is a lovely poem, and i'm sure so many of us can apply it to our loved ones. great job with this!
Novel Treatments / Just one of the gang
oh, beautiful. the first paragraph in itself captured me and made me feel as though i knew the characters. please continue, and i'm surely adding this to my favorites. wonderful descriptions... wondeful plot and story all in all. great job with this.
Short Story / The Mural
one thing i noticed is that the tenses in the story change a little too frequently. Perhaps i didnt follow, but it seems to jump from past tense to present sporadically. Otherwise, i like the plot you've got here. I think it's something that has great potential with some few minor grammar errors and such. for the most part, nice job.
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the ending is hysterical... great quality in the humor here. I'm enjoying the dialouge, i just think it's a bit much.... although, sometimes it's necessary in certain places more than others. i'm sure you'll feel it out and decide what's best.... although more of a narrative might be a little break for the reader. I'll look forward to reading more.