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AGE:
43
LOC: Falconer, NY
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 27
LOC: Falconer, NY
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 27
Well heres the page to tell a little about me
hmmmm I am a short n’ sassy lady that is 41 years old but doesn’t feel a day over 21! I plan to stay that way too!
I like to write whenever the mood strikes me,sometimes I write
things that I can’t believe came from me and sometimes I write things I don’t want to admit came from me…I hope to share ones that you will enjoy instead of despise but we each have our own tastes on what we feel touches us and what repels us so we’ll just have to see.
So I’ll see you around.
Love Purple * * *
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"Wisdom is merely knowledge with wrinkles"
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Silver slivers shine glittering beams of light streams dancing through my mind
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Its nice to listen to sit and just relax now may hum a little
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If hearts were like memory foam they could easily spring back from being trampled upon.
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The bar was smoke laden and the smells of everything imaginable permeated through the room, we didn't know whether we wanted to stay any longer because we were waiting for our boyfriends and they were already two hours late, or if we wanted to just say "fuck it!" and leave. We looked at each other through glassy eyes and both said "fuck it!" at the same moment, which sent us into girlishness giddy laughter. Stumbling out the bar arm in arm still giggling, with all those males just wishing th...
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This felt strange to read for some reason,maybe a little too much forced together just to sound alike,cut it up a tad and switch just a few around and I think it will flow better without feeling forced but thats just my opinion.
I feel anger and apathy in this work and I enjoyed quite a few of your phrases especially :mattresses’ lying on cookie-sheet-beds, I couldn't help but see this instantly in my mind, great writing!
This reminds me a lot of one of my pieces called "Still Life",I was in a mode of depression and anger when I wrote mine too so I understand this piece even more because of it.Good job.
I'm very confused by this work,it seems like anger at first then confusion then being totally lost and not being able to escape,is that the effect you were going for?If so,I got it,if not I didn't.
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