It was good, I want to read your story but give a little more to guess over, the fire on the sand, was it a chopper crash? a base in flames? hmmmm however you did get the thought right, I wonder how many people thought that as they died. Overall its good.

oooo arsenic? no..... hmmm very good.

Somewhat hard to read but still once you get it it is very good.

wow that was unique.... somewhat hard to follow, but it was very interesting

interesting story, Put a little more detail into the individual characters and you have a great story. you wrote this when you were 13? cool

yayayayayaya i remember reading this a few weeks ago=-D it still makes me feel happy!!! I really like the repetition of the you are a friend to me, I also really like the ending.