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AGE: 20
LOC: Oak Park, MI
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: March 09

I’ve been blessed with a pen and a pad.
I start to scribble and the words begin to dance.
My mind is a beautiful blueprint, but the pencil I posess turns it into a wonderful picture.
I swear I live by this like scripture, this pencil is therapy for me.
When I can’t move it carries me.
The things I write sometimes scare me, because if they came out of my mouth I’d be all they talked about.
But on paper their beautiful and they don’t hurt at all.
The way I express them, can throw me in any direction, so I direct them, to hit the heart.
These words I manipulate and throw right in your face.
Without naming it, I can put you in a time and a place.
So hop in my time machine and prepare for lift off.
Woosh! Were off. Prepare for your…

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Lyrics / Snake
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"the hook up didnt last long/ 20 min at the most/ his moms was right downstairs and plus the condom broke/ that happened many times before so they didnt trip/ he got geared up for round two/ and again they went at it/ no condom this time/ he told her/ 'I got this"/ unbeknownst to her/ there was precum on the tip/ he was a player/ n they told her to listen/ there was a bunch in the sea/ n everyday he went fishing/ his venom began to seep through her system/ n the baby she was carrying was NOT ...
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Poetry / Female 101
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Dear Owner, I am a female. I bend and break easily so please handle with care. My instructions are intricate so have your tools prepared. I need lots of attention, if not i'll get lonely. I'm very authentic, not at all phoney. Made 100% beautiful, so I'm not at all cheap. If your up to pay the price then I'm yours to keep. I am a female. My exteriors soft with a smooth interior. My materials precious you really have to take care of it. I need lots of love to keep my condition mint. If you bre...
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Flash Fiction / Hu$tle Bunny
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I remember the day that my mother died and its messed up because she was all that I had. I was an only child and my father had let his little head get to his big one and was off in California somewhere. I was never that close with any of my cousins or fam, it was just me and mom. It was the first day of my senior year at Mumford High. I was posted in front of the school waiting for my mom to come scoop. I got mad stares from both females and males because I was fly as hell. My mom hustled an...
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Flash Fiction / Scared Straight
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Scared Straight I was at my house on 9 mile and Greenfield. Situated in the suburbs, the grass was a nauseating green, the pool in my backyard was clear, sparkling like just fallen tears, and the streets were quiet. Radclift was the street. Black and white bricks made my house look like a huge chocolate mint chip cookie. Wander inside and through the kitchen. You find me standing at the top of the landing like I’m about to walk the plank. Boom boom. Boom boom. That’s the sound of my heart bea...
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Lyrics / Big Shi* Poppin
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I go hard bitch! You cant break me Take me n lace me Cash out n cake me The flavor is cherry You mad he wanna taste me He ate me His vitamins, needs it on the daily His baby, his lady YOU are just a maybe The dro that I blow keeps me so damn lazy I'm fly and you hate it Mad you didnt make it Don't have to give it up I go in and I take it So save it DRAMA Its for ya mama N for my baby, i'll go ahead n bust the llama Bonnie to his Clyde, he knows I'm down to ride That's why we at the mall buyin...
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Poetry / Lost Soul
I like the end part. "I will pray for you though not tonight. I am tired. Tomorrow." Catchy. KUDOS
It is creepy how you wrote this right before your friend died. Its deep...sickening almost, like you can feel each event unfolding. KUDOS
Poetry / Sandwich
"Anger to the body is despicable and lethal, but it’s spread on my bread like butter. " This could also double as a quote too! I like this. Its smart, fresh, and makes you have to think! KUDOS
Poetry / Outcast
I used to be this girl and I hate sometimes reading stuff like this because of what it can remind me of. It makes me mad, sad, and much more but that's all good news for you. I like! KUDOS
Poetry / Invisible
I feel invisible alot of times too. You should write a poem about how your visible now after you were invisible. I like. KUDOS
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