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AGE: 31
LOC: Spokane, WA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 31

Just a guy who likes to write.  Currently working on a story (the one posted).  Also like to write some poetry and lyrics and humorous stuff and dark things and quotes and…

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Poetry / O157:H7
Version 1
0 Reviews   0 Comments
  A freak you call I.   Only Other loves know you. Open this heart to bleed it.   Hate tinging love once endured.    
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / *Currently Untitled* (pt. 2)
Version 1
8 Reviews   10 Comments
Where there had once been a car, there now stood a rock troll. There had been no flash, or "popping" noise, or rush of wind, or anything that most people assume to occur when something disappears and a something else takes its place. The troll just stood there, slowly munching on the rock that was in its mouth while turning its head to take in its new surroundings. The drivers and passengers within the vehicles, around where Rick's car had been, didn't pay much attention to the new...
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Humor/Satire / What Makes a Good Review
Version 1
10 Reviews   41 Comments
I don't know.
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Poetry / Polaris
Version 2
10 Reviews   4 Comments
  The stars whispered to me, looking for their sister. A sister who had fallen to earth. I lied, told them I hadn’t seen you. I hope you weren’t made for the heavens; My hope is that you were made for me.  The ocean bellowed in rage through her breakers. She spoke to me of her missing soul, I ignored her pleas. Your blue-grey eyes betray you and the soul you stole. Depths within them draw my breath away. I am lost at sea.  Polaris, bring me back in. The roses crie...
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Poetry / Ebony Crystal Thoughts
Version 1
11 Reviews   15 Comments
Ebony crystal thoughts dammed up within a white brittle shell; Won't utter their syllables for fear of their essence. Yet you demand to know their substance and all they mean; Forgetting the wounds they inflicted last time around. Fuck their need to destroy all that I hold dear. Ignorance is holiness when they surface near; Remain in the bliss that only I can afford you. While I struggle with these ebony crystal thoughts.
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Poetry / In Process
by a_leas
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Flash Fiction / Gavin
by l13dj13
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Where Wolf-Ch2 /recap
by Anonymous
Good read. Interesting and different. Curious about where it's going. Only one issue (and this is a personal issue, take it or leave it): through out the whole writing you explain everything. There's no room for my imagination. No room for me to work out what you are saying. In doing this you reveal your hand too quickly, not leaving the suspense. Instead of telling us who is and isn't a human (or werewolf), leave us guessing for a bit. You left us curious as to who Cavil's love was for a bit...
Flash Fiction / Motivation
by Nosnibor
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Poetry / Untitled
by SineadHolmes19
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