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AGE: 17
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: February 04

I am a redheaded aquarius who tries to get the most out of life.

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Children's / Cats and Crats
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Call to the mothers! Call to the men! Call to the chandelier! Rally the footmen! Rein up the steeds! Dusk is growing near! Aristocrats take back the night Dancing shoes in haul With feet-alight and hair-a-height They scamper to the ball Snails and wigs And roasted pigs Feathers in a plume Crystal light And silken night The aroma of perfume Hands on waists And food in mouths The cats have come to play Strings and brass And ruffles awry They bow and bend and sway Bow to your partner Bend to th...
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Quotes / Six Word Memoir
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“Redo, revise!” Can I stop now?
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I smile and give, words live. Words turn into butterflies. Fly away. Happy thoughts, happy words: Happy stories. Rainbows. Unicorns. Who writes about them? Endure. Frown. Put pain on paper. "Redo, revise!" Can I stop now?
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Flash Fiction / Jonathan's Story
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Lying naked in the grass with only the sky overhead, Jonathan let out a long, held in sigh. He closed his eyes and felt the sun warm his skin, tan from the days of swimming and chasing ice cream trucks. He had no fear of being discovered here, all those who may have come along this way were busy working in big cities and typing at keyboards. The last of the children in the area had left only a little after Jonathan had; around the time his brother had left for college. Only he had returned t...
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Flash Fiction / Butterfly kisses
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The room was dark and quiet. All that could be heard were the faint sounds of breathing drifting from the bed and into the walls. In such quiet, one could almost hear the thoughts of the restless man who was too tired to sleep. In fact, Jonathan Paltrove was almost too tired to live. Try as he may to create distractions for himself, there was no escaping the dark and lonely night. In defeat, Jonathan reached for his bathrobe and pulled it over his pale, naked body. The girl in his bed stirred...
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Poetry / crowded
I loved the line in this piece, "parades of skin." The poem moved very well. You did a good job of giving purpose to the material. At first, it seemed that you were just describing the crowd but then, when you brought an individual intot the midst, it gave the poem purpose and meaning. The format was easy to read and understand and the imagery was phenominal. Great job!
This little piece is quite adorable. It was fun to try and figure out what kind of animal you were talking about (Shredding the sweater is what got me). I loved the sweet rhymes, it would be very easy for a child to understand. You may want to make the words a bit more bouncy and fun to listen to though (maybe a few more exclamation points?). Overall, it is a wonderful little poem.
This poem really brought the moon's beauty into prospective: In the end, it's just a big round rock covered with dust. Since one often hears poems about the beauty of the moon, it was interesting to hear it described in such a cold and dark way. Full of feeling and very sad, this poem was deep and interesting. In writing, your job is to make people think and you definitely did that in this poem. Great job!
A sweet little slice of life. Though it is more of a reflection than an actual poem, I still like it. I feel that you could make this into a lovely, longer poem with lots of imagery and feeling. It is nice how it is though and I wouldn't blame you if you wanted to keep it this way. Very nice.
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Humor/Satire / Holy Wars
Quotes / Heads you win

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