This is great. Amazingly written. It left me in suspense and holding my breath at some parts. I really look forward to reading more of your work.

This is really funny. I think mostly due to the fact that it's true. It is based on the facts on what Thanksgiving really is. I can't wait to read about what you have planned for easter.

In such a small amount of lines you were able to emit such strong emotions. You used great words and I really think you portrayed the feeling.

Every page I read I wanted more and more until I finally realized there was no more. I wanted to see some time of happy ending. Like do you ever get the guy. But you never do. You long for him and secretly he did for you. But its too late...or is it? I would hope that there is more to the two of you.

But then i wonder, what is the other part? If its what i think it is, then you have your parts mixed up. Love is misery.

I wish that it was that simple. To just be able to wash someone away like that. Its never that simple. I like the urgency in this whole recollection. And how when the act is over it doesnt seem as important as it was while it was occuring. Meaning was lost.

I find this very witty. Don't get me wrong it's sad too. In six words you were able to depict loneliness and all that a failed relationship entails. Keep writing, i'll be sure to keep reading.

Love works in ways we will never understand and it is useless to even attempt to try. New lover? Just be true.