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This was a surprisingly great read! This is not my favorite genre but I must admit this caught be off guard.... -Is my style of writing obvious? Interesting?- Very much so -Is the dialogue believable?- Are you kidding- yes it is -Are the descriptions full and interesting?- Well thought out and delivered with proffesionalism -In a full version, do you think this manuscript could be published?- Hell yes! I am deffinately looking forward to reading more of your work, and please keep my updated a...

You should consider mabey advortising for Mr. Clean. For me this doesnt work in the haiku form. It in no way enlightens me.... Its like writing a haiku about scrubbing the oven. Every line of this haiku for me is dull. Good luck.

9 out of 10. I had to read it a few times to understand it...But sometimes thats good. Nice work.

I like this. Even for a odd subject such as a sponge I find this well written and best of all true. Good work!

I don't enjoy the extra syllables. This is not Haiku and it belongs in another catagory... nit here... Would you sing opera at a country concert? On its own as a poem it is nice though to your credit.