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AGE: 44
LOC: Cordova, TN
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: January 17

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Poetry / I Wonder
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I wonder if…. The fire that ignites passion can drift from soul to soul. Does it leave only ash and waste, a heart of soot and toll. I wonder if…. A spark foating across a kiss is burning embers in her eyes, A warmth felt inside another, is where my affection lies. I wonder if…. The time to learn someone is forgotten in the end. Love is never wasted, setting fire inside a friend. Phillip L Mensi
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Poetry / I Am Creation
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I Am Creation I give you my eyes , see the beauty you are. Every reflected particle contrast the other. I give you my ears , hear your name from my lips. A sweet taste of sound. I give you my mind , clog my day with thoughts of us. Conscious , the dream is real. I give you my hands . Each bump , I drag my fingers. Feel the texture as I hold. I am Creation . Molded not from dirt, but from will. I dance happily. With the pain of time, in the flesh I grow. The seconds we are apart are eternal, T...
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Your laugh , like wind through the trees. Calming the soul and stirring the spirit. The waves making memories , pounding the shores of your heart. If it were to rain in those inviting pools, I would sit on those shores with you. Wraped in a blanket , trying to find out, why you were so happy, or so sad. The sunshine your smile, warming my skin with desire, of a journey, to fill a heart , made for two. I can't be the wind, but gentle through your hair. I can't be the waves, but reflect the moo...
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Poetry / Journeys End
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Sitting here on the curb. The trolley kept passing. I feel the thump grow as it gets closer. Then it meets me to a peak. Only to weaken away. I don't know how many times we traveled. Cars passed with treads filled, Almost inconsequential to the sound. The sun may have climbed and set 100 times. Buildings rose and then fell, with weathered hands and tired eyes. I don't know how much passed. I didn't care, Thinking of you. Phillip L Mensi
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Poetry / Pain
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Pain is nourishment for the jealosy of the dead. With every breath I take, Till the last I make, It feeds my very Soul. Phillip L Mensi
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I really liked this. I usually like to see verses or sections to make me pause . A poet can use this to to group ideas in a poem and let me see them. This poem however flows pretty well with out seperate verses. I don't think I like the very last line.... I feel the intention but it was not quite poetic IMO. nice images nice word choice overall. Maybe a little more shaping? Great job Phillip
Poetry / Milk
well, first two lines let me know what you are capable of....great images and poetic choice. For me way to long and tediuos. I followed the story and images and it just kept leading and leading, no build up , really no impact at the end. I may be missing the whole point , hidden? I did see several images and points in each section but could not tie the whole thing together. A poem this long really, really should be so superficial becasue you are drained from trying to perceive at the end. I r...
Poetry / Canto #6
I love theremin reference .. as in the touchless instrument? The antenna ref ..again theremin radio waves.....Theremin Hahahaa I see the subject matter now that I am at the end! I grasp the context of the big picture and there was plenty little things to think about if I wanted to. The symbolism worked well. Good job. Phillip
Non-fiction / A Girl's Best Friend
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Poetry / Glass Hammer
Wow, I liked it. I never got borerd. It flowed and the form was decent. Good subject and content. The sock made me laugh....it felt it odd and not so poetic following your other words. If that is what you wanted...it worked. Your good points are lines like... "....I’m writing in the dark… and I need a new light"..... ....."missing all my angles".... This is both literal and metaphorical. Glass Hammer excellent visual title for what you did with it...can't wait to read more from you. You even ...