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LOC: United States
GEN: Female
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Moon Beams, Desert dreams, Rays of light, Flashing past scenes. Stormy nights, Gypsy souls in flight, From dusk to dawn, We had a second sight. Bitter tears, Silent fears, Hopeful dreams, Clever schemes, Cactus, Dirt, and Rocks. Memories of a yellow lunch box.
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Paint me lavender, Like in the days before time. When together we walked in the garden, Of crimson and lime. When dreams where as soft, As angle wings, And all around, was the warmth of spring. Envelop my soul, In your sweet love, So sublime, And paint me lavender, Like in the days before time.
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Poetry / Time
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If, with the return of the morning sun, You awoke and found me gone, Would your soul still be free? Or would it be chained, To the memory of loving me. And with the continuance of time, Would you still deny, What even now, You try so hard to hide? And with the passing of many years, Would you start to wonder, Why you had this fear? And in the wisdom of a life time, Would it be then? That you would see, All meaning lied, In a love meant to be,
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Poetry / You are the sea
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I am the moon, You are the sea, In the night , You reflect me. I am the sand, You are the sea, With every caress, You reach, A deeper part of me. I am the rain, You are the sea, I sprinkle down upon you, And you become one with me. I am the earth, You are the sea, Till the end of time, You will be apart of me.
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Novel Treatments / Chapter 2--Way South
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Poetry / Ladder
Well written, no clichés here. The reader can truly identify with this on many levels
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Poetry / X
I liked all of it but the last part, it started off as in compilation, then the end seemed more juvenile. This part I found humorous, (Love don’t know how to reject crazy)
This was a great poem, very intense in parts, I would not change it at all, I have very many lines in it that are my favorite, (Learning the meaning of the term “God”; Learning what Hell is like; Living in Hell.) so intense, I believe a poem should be where the reader can relate to it, and everyone in life can relate to this, you must have been in deep thought when you wrote it.
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