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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Sins- Prologue
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Two armies faced each other. The last army of the once great kingdom of Italy stared at its counterparts on the opposite end of the flush green field. There faces grew paler as the minutes passed. There was a look of absolute terror in the whites of there eyes, as they peered at the viscous grins on faces of there foes. They were a unorganized army made up mostly of farmers and peasants with pikes. The other army however was not human at all. They were ghouls,mercenary creatures, created in ...
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Poetry / Uncle
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I was frozen in Shock I was pushed as people began to flock I didn't know what to feel I thought it wasn't real. I thought of my uncle on the hundredth floor And how would he make it to the door Would he have to fight Just to make it down a flight I felt the ground rumble As the tower took it's tumble I covered my ears I didn't to hear The screams of fear I asked my self why I didn't cry As i watched my uncle die
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Screenplay / Hey Jude
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1 FADE IN: 1 2 EXT. HOUSE- MORNING 2 We come see a white two story house in Bucks County, PA. It's a nice house with a garden in the front yard and a side driveway with a separate two car garage. It looks like the others on its street. 3 INT. JUDES'S ROOM- MORNING 3 An alarm goes off as we look around the somewhat messy bedroom before coming to a futon. A young white eighteen year old high school student named JUDE O'DONNELL lifts his head out from under the covers. Groggy, he looks around a...
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Limericks / QuiCk FiX
This is a very funny limerick, somone once told me its the last line in poetry of all kinds that will always leave the most impact and ill tell you what i wont forget this one because i almost spit dr.pepper from my nose out of laughter.
Short Story / Rai (working title)
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / equality
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Untitled
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / When Happiness Falls
That right there is incredible. I liked everything about it, the alternate earth in the future and how you refer to the ancestors as us is great. I couldnt find any spelling or major grammer mistakes. I gave everything a 10/10.
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