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LAST LOGIN: October 03
Some people have a natural way with words and I thank the LORD my soul to keep. For giving me the ability to see this clearly.
i AM ENJOYING THIS MODEST OUT BREAK BEFORE i LOSE MY SITE COMPLETELY!
I feel like a philanthropist sharing with you so freely these things that are so important to me , However it also gives me the distinct feeling that you
Owe me a thousand dollars
...........................................................................Payco
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Well i think that this is a very good concept the idea that experience is nothing more than perception and opinion of it self in a never ending cycle. I also like the ending of this piece in the question " can we ever be a blank canvas of our own making " nice.
Well it was not as bad as you were making it sound. I thought that you did an ok job in that you started with an idea and in a direction and stayed with it to the end....kind of keep up the writing.
LOL good. I seen it coming But the smile only got wider as I read on. I think that you kept the flow of this piece right on tract and I also think that you have the innate ability to take an idea and to write it! don't take it for granite a lot of people can not do that.
50.0% Review Quality (2 Votes)
I love the way you begin this piece, and I really like the way your work flows like a story with a "true" beginning and a solid finish one that leaves me wondering about the "more that there is always more of" Thank you.
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