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LOC: San Diego, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 07
LOC: San Diego, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 07
College in San Diego. Psychology major. Write poetry to express thoughts and cure pain.
I have an amazing best friend. Love. Basketball. Family. Friends. This is what defines me.
I aspire to be a lyricist someday. Even if just one song is used… it’s my dream.
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i'm lucky to know you let alone call you my own i've loved you always and forever will i.... call you my home it started out all too innocent holding hands led to holding hearts barely knew each other then barely apart but this this has become the kind of love that makes you say oh whoa-oh oh oh yyyeah. it started out all too innocent holding hands led to spooning spooning leads to you know what (wait no.. what?) i wanted to your lips lingered near did i have...
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i'm lucky to know you let alone call you my own i've loved you always and forever will i.... call you my home it started out all too innocent holding hands led to holding hearts barely knew each other then barely apart but this this has become the kind of love that makes you say oh whoa-oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh yyyeah. it started out all too innocent holding hands led to spooning spooning leads to you know what (wait no.. what? you dont know either?) i wanted ...
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i'm lucky to know you let alone call you my own i've loved you always and forever will i.... call you my home and this this has become the kind of love that makes you say oh whoa-oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh yyyeah. and this this has become the kind of love that makes you say oh whoa-oh oh oh oh oh right there little to the left my bad right there don't stop oh yeahh right there don't stop ohhh yeahhh. what wait i think i just climaxed
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It's an initiative looking to free all sexual orientations from discrimination. Sexual orientation is not so relevant as what type of person they are, their character, their personality, and they way in which they carry themself in the world. It does not define a person. It should not, therefore, limit an individual in any way. Everyday there are people all around the world that get married, only to be divorced a time later. Whether it be days, months, years. And here there are people fully ...
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It's my eyes that want to speak the truth, but it's my mouth that cant help but lie to you. It's become the epitome of my youth: I lie for the sake of lying, no intent to harm you. I lie to tell a story. I lie to simply amuse. I lie when i don't have to. i lie i lie to you. You call expecting the truth but my answer is only a ruse. I am deceptive unnecessarily; maybe i wouldn't be if you didn't insist on smothering me. No one needs to know exactly where i am: If all you care about is my well ...
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i love the show this is in reference to. they have the type of relationship you dont have to be gay to appreciate or be entertained by. the show is universal. anywho... i like the idea of and where i think you were going with this. i think it might need a little format editing. some of the lines are run-on sentences and commas need to be changed into periods. the second line of the chorus falls a little flat. it's not powerful enough for the content it looks to reflect and summarize. i hope y...
i really like the concept. "pity whore" is both entertaining and intriguing. simple critique: with out... is one word "without." i know it's a small critique, but it's a necessary one i think. format is very important. also... the wording of the third line, second stanza seems a bit backwards. maybe "where can it be found?" is what was meant. also, along the lines of format... this definitely needs punctuation. punctuation helps someone read how it is meant to be sung and a lack of is very di...
you approached a very cliche' topic (girls and the bad boys) in a very unique and satisfying way. i enjoyed it. though it does leave the listener/reader wanting a bit more. it's a little short... but that's difficult to accurately judge on here when i can't hear the music that it's set with. otherwise, good job overall.
This was an awesome entry. it was the type of piece that as i read it i found myself nodding in agreement all throughout. it was not only overall relate-able material, but it presented concepts that people think and feel on an every day basis in an eloquent and easy to read way. it was very well written. it represented the monotony of office lifestyle in a way that made in nostalgic and comedic at the same time. good job and thanks for the entry.
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it's a very subtle yet powerful piece. the wording is not overly strong or dramatic, but that seems to be advantageous for this piece. it seems to me to be nonchalant wording for a dramatic and intense topic. this, to me, is effective in conveying the proper emotions. good job.
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