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Think Tank Heres the basic idea. 5 people are locked inside a room for 48 hours to test peoples reactions together in an enclosed environment for an increased amount of time. We can either start with using someone doing a voiceover to introduce everything or just go the Star Wars route and just use text to define the experiment. On September the 8 in the year 2008, 5 college students were enrolled in an experiment to view their reactions while being enclosed in a room together for 30 hours. F...
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Fresh Memories By Paul Ayers INT. CLUTTERED KITCHEN. DAY Sunlight is pouring in through the curtain less windows onto the kitchen table as Tyler is sitting across from his grandfather as they are drinking coffee and look to be in deep conversation. TYLER So what do you think it’s going to be like? GRANDPA Tyler the only time I ever left this town was to fight overseas, and I guarantee that if college is anything like that your mother wouldn’t have even let you apply. Besides, if I were you I’...
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EXT. Grocery Store Loading Area. Day A young CLERK walks up to the back of an 18-wheeler and unlocks the hatch to the door and then pushes the door up to reveal a truck filled with groceries for him to unload. He climbs up to the groceries and picks up a box and then takes it and gets out of the truck and walks back inside the grocery store. Int. Busy Grocery Store. Day The clerk walks down a very crowded aisle being very careful with the box until he comes to the milk aisle. He then very car...
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INT. CLUTTERED BEDROOM. DAY. The bedroom is very cluttered as we first see several articles of clothes as well as soda cans in the floor as the camera raises to show SETH’s body in the bed still covered with in his blanket as his feet are at the head of the bed resting on the pillow. His alarm clock begins ringing and he quickly sits up and slaps his alarm clock off his dresser. Seth then gets out of bed as we see him look at a picture of himself and MYSTERY GIRL. INT. BATHROOM. DAY We then s...
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EXT. Grocery Store Loading Area. Day A young CLERK walks up to the back of an 18-wheeler and unlocks the hatch to the door and then pushes the door up to reveal a truck filled with groceries for him to unload. He climbs up to the groceries and picks up a box and then takes it and gets out of the truck and walks back inside the grocery store. Int. Busy Grocery Store. Day The clerk walks down a very crowded aisle being very careful with the box until he comes to the milk aisle. He then very car...
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This is the first part of your treatments that I have read so far here on urbis. however I really find your writing to be inspired by something that comes through strongly in your writing which hooks the reader and allows them to be inspired as well. I look forward to reading more of your work and hope that it is as good as this.
This is a very well written sci- fi story and what i really enjoy about it is that there are human elements that make it somewhat believeable which most science stories do not have. Its one of the better stories I've read here and I can not wait to see what you come up with next.
So far this is the first peice of your writing that I've seen and already I'm kind of hooked. The images and character development in this is something that always seems to be lacking in other sci-fi ideas and in most movies. I just want to say that this was amazing and I look forward to reading your other writing.
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Its an amazing story. I would love to know where you found the inspiration for the characters and look forawrd to reading more of your work.
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