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AGE: 59
LOC: Sarasota, FL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 04

I am an Author with one book being published and three others in the works.  I have written articles and short stories that have seen the light of day in local rags, I was too busy playing architect to pursue a writing career…Now I have time to do it.
I see life through a funny and sarcastic spyglass and I am always sorry to see that most around me tend to go out of their way to find libidinous interpretations to the otherwise obvious.  They masturbate their brains into oblivion, rather than look and listen at what life at face value really is.
I live in Sarasota FL with my wife and a rambunctious Pug named Sophie.

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Non-fiction / The Paragon Gang
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Ms Suzanna Einstein LJK Literary Management Dear Ms. Einstein, This submission is entitled "The Paragon Gang, Dreaming of America and the Garden of stones". 81,711 words. 300 pages.   After the explosion of the septic tank settled and the damages were assessed, there were no doubts in the mind of anyone on the village that Pogsy, Mikey, Monty, Tommy and I were going to be a force with which to contend. The "Paragon Gang", as the adults called our little group, would o...
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Humor/Satire / The affair
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Mrs. Young was Dr. Harrison's assistant and receptionist, who had been with him for years. She was almost as old as Stonehenge and not as well preserved. She was half deaf and wore glasses with lenses the size of a telescope. She did not like children and particularly did not like Pogsy, Mikey, Tommy, Monty and me. She had seen too many of our catastrophes come to pass and disrupt her well-established office routine to have ever developed any kind of affection for us. Mrs. Young woke up one ...
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Non-fiction / six word memoir
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Born, looked, tried to go back.
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Non-fiction / six word memoir
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born,looked,tried to go back.
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Non-fiction / 6 word memoir
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Was born, saw mankind, how scary!
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Flash Fiction / A Wooden Spoon
by Marvin
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Quotes / Circles
by LAluver4ever
This is a short quote that is true but somewhat banal. I think you can take this thought and rework it in a more "literary" way. Just a thought,
Short Story / Six Word Memoirs: Creative Life
by ladymuniz
Thank heaven so creativity has been left over for the ones who are not totally loopy. Great sentence, I do not know if I would call it a memoir but the observation is accurate and historically documented. Good work. PIM
Short Story / Real Enough to Love
by Dream_Writer
You drive the reader from reality to pure dream-like fantasy and back to reality with the strokes of your character-writer's pen. You certainly keep the attention of the reader who will certainly want to know where you are going with that. I am not sure about some of the sentences you use "Greed soaked inside her leaving her wanting more" for instance and a few others. I would try to review them and make sure that the message comes across to the reader. You are right when you say that your sp...
Quotes / Six-Word Memoir!
by Mikhail_S
You throw it all out and make the reader wonder. A memoir that disturbs and intrigues. It certainly has shock value. I'll buy that one and I'll see what turns up at the end. PIM
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