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AGE: 18
LOC: Canada
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: December 26

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The colors of your eyes and I was the passing shadow The sleepiness of the sun shone so intense And I dreamed of my mind through a transparent window: I saw gears attacked by emotional sense; Fighting with lack of reason, you added the idea Of real love so great to dispel the act of betrayal And so you watched the sailors go away from the island and sail More and more you seem like a gift of a thousand flowers I watched from the fruit tree on the sunny hill As the curve of the wind was painte...
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Poetry / She Was Gone
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Short Story / The Check
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Poetry / Love's Red Ocean
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Short Story / Bike
A great and heart-warming story of fathers, memories, and a bike. I really like the motif of the bike always uniting the father and son characters and their relationship. It would be a great story to flesh out more as well. The story comes full circle too, in the end, starting and ending with Christmas representing family. Overall, well written and sentimental!
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Short Story / Whiskers on the Moon
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