I agree. Music is my life!

I found this piece beautiful. I really enjoyed the imagery. Well done.

I do agree that this piece needs work. Especially on the punctuation and the rhythm. It does have a good message though. Keep working. :)

I can understand that feeling. Of wanting to go back where everything seemed much simpler. Were freedom was running with your friends, playing in the rain. A time before we were placed in this "other world". 5 would be a nice place to visit.

This was a refreshing read today. Very witty and entertaining. I would look forward to reading more.

So crude yet entertaining! Very visual and at times you can almost smell it. Ha.

I found this very entertaining! It would make for a great post in the newspaper. Love the part about putting the cat in a fishbowl and calling it a catfish. Very clever!

I was very entertained by your peice. I would look forward to ready more. I make jokes about Bedazzlers all the time, so that was extra fun. I love the line "I was like Gandhi, but with pink underwear". Good times.

I really do like this. I think it could have been more clear about this "for you no longer exist" It seemed to have jumper or maybe I just can't see the meaning? However, the visuals were very nice! :0)

Nice! I really enjoyed the fifth stanza. It is really beautiful.