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AGE:
28
LOC: Chaska, MN
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: December 26
LOC: Chaska, MN
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: December 26
i sometimes believe that i think too deeply. Pain can come from this. however, this assists in my writing. It may be dark, beautiful and morose but i guess that defines me. although with the inspiration of beauty i can be lifted.
update: I no longer see myself as dark. In fact, I have very greatly “lightened up”. I am much happier now, but I find it interesting that I am lacking inspiration the happier I get. Whats with that?
my myspace check it out” www.myspace.com/slaphappyjess
If you do wish to reference my quotes, etc. plaease use my real name Jessica Furuli. Thanks
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Unless the madness tells you differently, you are an artist.
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How do you stop yourself from taking that slow walk off the plank into that abyss in which you once lived? After being ripped away from your home or what had become home The colors were gray and sometimes it rained very hard. The cold was never bothersome. You always did favor the cold. Always preferd the shadow instead of the sun from which it was born. And when the time came to be reborn, The light was painful to your eyes. Adaptation would occur But pills and talk could not always keep the...
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from the flames that became extinquished here i stand resurrected as in the past twice in the year my spirit death rebirth death rebirth the Phoenix etched permanent ink into soft pink skin a reminder that shall evoke the memories so many times and many more to come i, the Phoenix, will rise into the sun
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here it is again more scars to show the victim that i am the victim i always may very well be here i am held captive to the demons hiding within twenty six years fighting to be released twenty six years of submission concealed inside the dark caverns of my psyche must those demons fully expose themselves in order for the light to conquer them? fight with sword of fire deep into the belly of my capters preferences of flight tell me to hide to cower in the cave i must succeed in my dominance to...
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There is no music playing today Not even the lazy tune of a funeral march The slow low cello has put it strings to rest Surprising for how I feel Where is the dance fever The “Rock Out with Your Cock Out” Care free spirit Where have all the flowers gone? Am I only happy when it rains? I don’t feel the music of the hills The backwater slow jamboree Or the skull cracking head banging jam I can’t hear the watery voices so fluid and gentle Or the rooted voices like strong powerful trees The fire ...
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Hmm. I know that you may not like what I have to say, but I must be honest. The very first part I liked. In my head it was almost like a voice over to the beginning of a film. Then, I became completely lost. There were all these characters introduced but not really heard from again. Then it turned into this office, japanese guys, virtual reality thing. It was quite hard for me to follow. Please don't take it too personally, it just may not be my genre. p.s. I did like the few humorous bits th...
This was certainly a fun little read. I like reading things that make me smile. It would be great to come up with even more of these letters. I would very much enjoy reading them.
I really enjoyed reading this. Although I am 28, I can still appreciate what you have to say and with this writing, visualize and somewhat put myself in your shoes. I do not neccessarily want to get older, but if Ican think about these things with humor, I know that the transistion will be much easier! This would be a great piece for the readers digest. I bet a lot of folks would get a kick out of it.
I have to say that after reading the title as well as the first sentence, I thought I was getting ready for an entertaining read. However, as I continued, I became quite bored. It does not seem that this character has many oddities, but more like one really bad case of un-treated mental ailment. It may be best, to either change the title or add a description. Also, your work on the spelling and grammer could be improved. I think you have potential. Keep working at it.
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