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AGE: 14
LOC: Scranton, PA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 22

I’m a young writer that is eager in every way to write my feelings down and turn them into a gripping and beautiful story that will be loved by many. I’ve wrote as soon as i knew how. I would write plays or poems or simply journal entries. My parents would always say that it was an outstanding accomplishment for someone my age but I knew they were simply saying that because I was their daughter. I came to use urbis when i understood that people would give honest constructive critism in response to peoples writing. I know that it must be unusual even in the smallest way to see a thirteen year old girl writing and putting it out there for the world to see, but do not look at my age. Look at my work. I hope that I give some of you pleasure …

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Poetry / Break
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break's a funny word you can break someone's spirit like taming a wild horse you can break someone's face by smashing your fist until they taste blood. you can break someone's heart twisting and tearing it apart you can break up with your someone you can break someone up into laughter you can break down in despair you can take a break and hope that life isn't a mistake
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Pity me Hate me Think of me As panicky But I was young And before I strung Myself up on the rafters I just felt as though I couldn’t take anymore of that Taunting laughter Every word I spoke Just seemed to be a joke So blame me! Shame me It was all just a game to me I’m sorry I’m mad I’m anything but sad It’s alright, begrudge me Just please don’t judge me I’m just so tired, so tired of living And everything [everyone] so unforgiving So I’ll le...
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Poetry / Kid
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Feel my hand Trembling hard Want it bad But the thing that’s sad? You shouldn’t ask me You shouldn’t want me And every tick of the clock Steals my childhood Completely You must have known That I’d never have shown How inexperienced I was I should be skinning my knees Climbing trees And not for other reasons And pg movies are all I should have ever been shown Because when you’re a kid a lollipop Is all that should ever be blown.  
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Poetry / No turning back
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The burning, beating sun The muscles in your legs scream Run, just run away Don’t think about what you left behind Or what waits for you “I’m just trying so hard,” she sobbed “SHUT UP!” “Daddy. Please stop, put the bottle down.” “Mommy why are you crying?” “Sissy why are you sleeping? Wake up, please wake up.” Day turns to night A sunset made of red and orange Fades away To darkness She can’t stop She can’t go back
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Poetry / Under the bed
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Under my bed lives a colony of dust bunnies maybe several forgotten books. Under Susan's bed she's hid a mirror so she will never have to see her looks. Under Lola's bed she's hid herself so her mom won't see her bruises. Under Tony's bed there are empty beer cans and a packet of Carribean cruises. Under Mary's bed there are birth control pills that she doesn't want her father to see, And under our life there's secrets and lies that shows how unperfect we all can be.
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Quotes / Lost love
Reading this was a painful experience, not from the quality of your writing [which i enjoyed] but from its message. This invokes a feeling of heartbreak. Well done.
Quotes / My 6 word life
this quote breathes truth. if you were aiming for that in your quote then you most definitely succeeded. Well done! =)
Quotes / 6 word quote....
This took me a moment and I was all about to say not necessarily but now that I've thought about it i agree completely. Dreams would not come true without the people to dream them. This is artfully put good work.
Quotes / OUR CHOICE
That's very true, and not enough people realize that they should want better then just what people think they can achieve. A very thoughtful quote.
Quotes / Creative Genius
I love your choice of words, the way you put this is like a declaration. Doing something that is not done or "speaking the unheard" as you say it. Well done.