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Epic Mickey Or Are Mickey Mouse and Jerry Seinfeld really the same Person? by Brett Matthew Perlman   For some reason growing up I never really liked Mickey Mouse. I loved Donald and with some reluctance actually liked Goofy. I couldn’t stand Minnie and outright hated Pluto.   I felt guilty for not liking Mouse because he was a pretty swell guy. He upheld ideas I like such as virtue and chivalry. You could never picture Mickey Mouse Flipping someone off who cut him off in tra...
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Poetry / Pessimism
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Pessimism The whirling gyre of oblivion waits.
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Diamond Heart (or the gargoyles Lament)   I’m covered in cold calcified slate shale skin, but if you look in my eyes it can never hide my sin. Now in a morose state that poisons to pith, I stand upon this monolithic Mausoleum. My Talons clenched within its pseudo marble venire. It is a memorial, a farewell to those who have delicate sentiments.   Soft Hearts are as pliable Taffy. It is safer for most to go with the ebb and flow of emotional tides, a martyr to its drowning pull...
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  Frankenstein Monster Jihad (a poem about Fighting ones inner nature) A jigsaw puzzle with razor blade pieces made of epidermis, splashed with the plasma of ethereal phantoms and sewn gestated tendons. What fate waits at the bottom of acid lakes and prisma color bale fires? There will be time for that later.   The Monster made me. For ever thing he took away a hollow knife point was given, which fills with the coagulated miasma of my inner slave. He drinks it in guttural salivation...
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Funny Vision I never laugh at vitreous humor.  
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Poetry / "Fight"
Sound like it would be a better lyric then poem. Have you tried it in a rap. I believe it could work quite well.
Hmmmm sounds like it is classic but i feel some stiring of modern politics in there as well. I enjoyed it
Crime, Thrillers & Mystery / Tucson (a very small excerpt)
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I would read other written works to see how the rythms of the wording goes. It reads alittle choppy and does not sound very poetic.
Lyrics / Reach Out to Me
Many lyrics use repitition. Many love songs also use the word love. Im not saying your song sounds any different than any on the radio. it does sound like one on the radio. I heard one the other day and almost the whole song was love love love love youuu. For once i would love to hear a song express feeling of love in a new way and not say the same themes repeated over and over. Say it a new way.
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