NormaLizeth's profile
AGE:
19
LOC: Las Vegas, NV
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: December 03
LOC: Las Vegas, NV
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: December 03
My name is Norma Lizeth, I am almost 18 years old and I attend college on Las Vegas, Nv. writing and readying were my path to learn the American language at a faster rate than what was expected of me. The first real book I read was ‘The old man and the sea’ and I still feel sad when I remember the end.
It was around that time that I started thinking of my own stories. I have spent around two years in Fanfiction(dot) net building my skills on writing and plot building.
This is my time to move again an step forwards and show my original works.
Items
Version 2
15 Reviews
7 Comments
Chapter 2: Binding Rings Scott felt strong hands pull him from his warm bed. At first, he thought it was a new part to his dream since there was no warm light or soft ground. He was standing on the cold floor of the dorm looking up at the older Thigthens that held his shoulder and pushed him forward. The gray walls of the dorm somehow seemed out of place as he gained good balance. He looked before him at those standing at the door-less entrance. He had wanted this to be just another ordinary ...
Ratings & Rankings
Version 3
11 Reviews
4 Comments
Prologue: Melina was clinging to the chair as the doctor smiled at her. It was time to choose. She tried to smile back and not really think of the downside. Her husband placed a soft hand on her shoulder. They had already talked about it. It was going to be the right. The doctor held two fists closed around two similar objects. No matter what they would be happy; he had reminded them. She pointed to the right before he opened his palm. A small pink pear showed. “Congratulations, it’s a girl” ...
Ratings & Rankings
Version 1
10 Reviews
1 Comment
Chapter 2: Binding Rings Scott was pulled from his warm bed by strong hands. At first he thought it was a new part to his dream since there was no warm light or soft ground. He was standing on the cold floor of the dorm looking up at the older Thigthens that held his shoulder and pushed him forwards. The four equally in length grey walls of the dorm somehow seemed out of place as he gained his good balance. He looked before him at those standing at the entrance with no door. He had wanted for...
Ratings & Rankings
Version 3
19 Reviews
1 Comment
Chapter 1: Inside the Beast In his young mind, order was all that mattered. He did not think much as he ran along the grey walled halls. It was just going with the flow of things. By memory, he knew the paths but still he kept a map with him just in case. The lights flickered above. He wanted to hurry before it happened again. I should report that. His white and lose clothes rustling was the only sound along stonewalls. The pipes that went through them fit perfectly with no leaks. It was all ...
Ratings & Rankings
Version 2
7 Reviews
0 Comments
Chapter 1: Inside the Beast In his young mind order was all that mattered. He didn’t think much as he ran along the grey walled halls. He was just going with the flow of things. He knew by memory the paths but still he kept a map with him just in case. The lights flickered above. He decided to hurry before it happened again. The young boy began to think; he should report that later. His white and lose clothes rustling was the only sound that echoed along the stone walls. The pipes that went t...
Ratings & Rankings
[ View all items ]
Reviews
To make such mistakes, it happened to me once. It was very entertaining and realistic in some way since all of her excuses seemed of the kind we would actually try. the end is what I preffered. Did he really read it? and if he did is he flirting with her? I ask you to make a sequal or make it into a series of chapters or something, don't let it stop here. the fluency was great, your spelling good as far as I could tell.
I know the feeling, still the poem doesn't seem very clear. I read your commentary until later so the first thing that came to my mind was a person with psychological problems.
[ View all reviews ]
Favorites
People
