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LOC: Melbourne, FL
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LAST LOGIN: August 26
LOC: Melbourne, FL
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Quicker than the drop of a dime, her heart stops when he enters the room; yet once again starts pacing wildly again just as fast as it had stopped. For so long she has yearned for his wandering eye to focus solely on her, and her alone; but her shooting star has stopped glowing. Her knees are raw from praying, and she is toeing bankruptcy with all the pennies she has tossed into that golden wishing well, with its fresh crystal clear waters of promise and guarantee. She was living in a Disney ...
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Love isn't blind for it can plainly see, all the pain and suffering, it has came and done to me. It has hit, it has hollered, it has even screamed and yelled. I never thought you be the one who would make me hurt myself. But it wasn't intentional, for I only hurt my self, by saying in my mind, he loves me above all else. And I'll never find someone like you, and I know for a fact, that whatever you shall do to me, I'm never able to fight back.
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Emotions run rampid, Under that smile of hers. They think she's being overdramatic, Absolutely absurd. They've compared her to an actress, Trying to be a star. Even thought the truth is out, And still, from it, they're so far. Although they can't see it, Her emotional scars grow. She can't take it anymore, Please. Don't leave her alone! She's lost in a sea of confusion, She thinks every one she once loved is gone. Will you be a friend to her? And help her move along? Or will you turn your bac...
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Wow this piece is amazing. I literally had to re-read this to understand the consept, which to me is still forming in my mind. Your writing forces the reader to explicate this poem in their own mind. You are showing not telling, I love it! Keep writing like this and you will have more great writings!
I can feel your words, and your emotions in the last two stanzas, particularly the last "And so perhaps we are together forever after all My God! What a drag." I loved the realization in your writing. While i was reading it i could feel as if I myself was coming to such a conclusion. Then at the end "What a drag." expressed your attitude torwards your new thought. It made me rethink my thoughts on the message though out your poem, so it made me want to re-read your submittion. Great job!
There was not enough information in this "short story". I could feel the attraction in the authors words, but i am not drawn in to read his story. I felt as if though the author would tell about the "BOY" but soon ran out of words, so he would state, "Boy was a withered and battered middle-aged man with grey in his hair and beard. His wife Sylvia was exactly the same." What does he mean, exactly the same? Was she very masculine looking? What kind of characteristics made her the same, yet what...
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