Nippleguy's profile
AGE:
40
LOC: United States
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 09
LOC: United States
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 09
i’m working on a project and i thought i would try this site to see what kind of reaction my little things get.
I would be embarrased to have anyone know how much time i have spent reading over these things reading out loud trimming and rewording. i left high school after my freshman year, to “become a writer.”
that’s not a joke. I was so stupid.
the last 21 years i have done nothing but write every day. There have been dry spells. horrible. but the voices always come back. Demon always returns.
if you are smiling and nodding your head then we must be friends.
i am going to post what i’m working on from first idea to finished piece. A lot of this will be rough, unpolished, and/or absolute crap. The crap i won’t work on qui…
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You have the camera set up? good. can you leave me a pack of smokes? thanks. ok. i’ll see you in a couple days. On friday? Yes, yes, I understand. It's due then. Don't worry, i got it up here. Just have to put it down. Friday. Ok? shit. look what i found. An old pile! this must be from the late 80’s. i was still a kid. Besides writing, i had no idea who i was or what i was doing. guess that was enough tho. what other things was i into then, that i...
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You have the camera set up? good. can you leave me a pack of smokes? thanks. ok. i'll see you in a couple days. On friday? look what i found. An old pile! this must be from the late 80's. i was still a kid. Besides writing, i had no idea who i was or what i was doing. guess that was enough tho. what other things was i into then, that i still do now? still smoke. still masturbate. That's about it. but i drink now. that's new. so drinking, smoking, writing and touching myself as god intended. i...
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For christmas i brought my lover dental floss she had something in her teeth. my hearts gristle. i remember who this is about. heh, ok i must have written this so many years ago, but i'm still doing it. wow. i havn't changed in years.... very tired. drunk last night. work busy today. no sleep little food stomach i worked on this for quite a while before walking away.... the generic american condition an undercurrent of rationalization pouring toward oneness laughing from the edge as we shiver...
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A human heart ten miles across could not continue beating with the hole i bear. The bear is dead and that's a very nice hat. Can i borrow it? The hunter who shot the bear, his name is Frank. Frank is in love with a lesbian. The lesbian dreams of a human heart ten miles wide and the hat it wears.
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You have the camera set up? good. can you leave me a pack of smokes? thanks. ok. i'll see you in a couple days. On friday? look what i found. An old pile! this must be from the late 80's. i was still a kid. Besides writing, i had no idea who i was or what i was doing. guess that was enough tho. what other things was i into then, that i still do now? still smoke. still masturbate. That's about it. but i drink now. that's new. so drinking, smoking, writing and touching myself as god intended. i...
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i really like this. And i can identify. Little black ants have built nests in my coffee maker three of the last 5 springs. If the worst thing your wife will take from this piece is "coffee suspicion" then i suspect you have a good relationship that enables you the freedom to write whatever comes. i envy you.
This is great. Solid voice, natural rhythm and good image wrapped in humor. the only suggestion i have is not to touch this. it's perfect.
This piece is what (for me) poetry should be. Simple, powerful, and direct. the only thing i would suggest is rewording the first line. the comma, followed by blurred vision seems interrupting.
I like the seething in this. The image of the writer, sitting among the sheep and yet smoking outside is very honest.
right to the point and sarcastic. Dad in a box is brilliant.
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