I like the darkness and almost gothic like feel to this, i especially like the last lines 'dark hair slick back, sharp white teeth and cold pale skin' it has a vampire feel to it.

I thought this was really good. I liked the contrast of the serious imagery in the first part. It conjures up a Romeo an Juliet style tragedy of Lovers Leap. Then the contrast of humour with the man climbing over the fence.

I love the honesty and straight to the point nature of this poem. It has a very humourous feel.

I thought this was rather humourous. For some strange reason, reading this made me think about Bill Gates, maybe it was when i read Jill Gates.

I enjoyed reading this piece, It made me think about my own youth.

I am ebullient about this piece, love the last verse 'make love to my words'

I love this poem and the imagery it creates. It feels dark and powerful. Really enjoyed reading this piece, well done!!

This is very good!! Well done!!!

This was a good read, although it did feel very long. The content was clear and understandable.