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AGE:
17
LOC: Wauseon, OH
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 02
LOC: Wauseon, OH
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 02
I am now 17, 5 months away from turning 18, and am no closer to getting something published than I was when I joined this site last year.
I am having some trouble with writers block and it is honestly starting to make me believe that writing may not be my field. I would love some messages of encouragement or maybe even some of intense criticism. Whatever will help me through this time I will take.
If anyone has any advice and is willing to help me, please get back to me soon. I could use all of the help that I can get right now.
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" I wait with forlorn hope, that someday I will see your beautiful diamond eyes again."
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Chapter 1: The Day of My Enemy’s Arrival 17th February 1707 It is early morning and I find myself sitting in the mountains staring down at the harbor. This is a beautiful place that I rarely am allowed to visit because of time constraints. My duties as a kidea and to my country are far more important than any whim I might concoct in my mind. Today is supposed to be a magical one. A hathuran from the kingdom of Wolf Mist will be arriving on our shores. Not one wolf has dared enter my be...
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Glossary of Terms: Azullia- The creator of the vampyre race, she controls all that happens in the land and is an important advisor to the people. Her word is law and none dare to question her, because she is known in their lore as the esteemed lady of death. Al Ekheo-The Angel Aji-Peace Baleho-Nanny Brutah- Battle Cezak- War Con para tri ko lo- Forever will you be mine Dheka- Idiot Hathuran-Ambassador Inlete- Father Inleta-Mother Kalesh- King or Ruler Kidea-Princess Kideo-Prince Letich Ritor-...
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I went back to our meeting point and found I was back there before Rev. I sighed and looked around the park and then back at the knife I had attached to my side. No one needed to see the knife that would undoubtedly come in handy in the near future. “ I don’t understand why all of this has to happen now. I didn’t choose to be my fathers son, hell I didn’t even choose to be the person I have become, but I did choose to take revenge for my mother and my girlfriend and I will do it.” I said re-r...
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” DAMNIT….” I screamed as I jumped out of the tree I had been resting in. The hot July wind was a bitch blowing the hot sand into my eyes. I was starting to get a bit annoyed with it when I saw Rev coming through the park an air of determination had seemed to set about him. ” Still up there I left you and hour ago to go get information.” Rev looked very annoyed and seemed. …well I guess he seemed kinda worn out something I had never seen happen to him before. ” Yeah I’m still up here I waited...
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This is a good start to a story, it is engaging and will make a few people recall having done the same thing in the main character losing her wallet and a kind person helping them out. I think if you continue on this route your story will turn out just fine.
I actually really liked this. It was short straight and to the point. That's just the way a lot of writing should be.
There was nothing about this poem that I didn't enjoy. Every word had me paying the utmost of attention to what was comming next. I thought alot about someone i lost and this almost made me cry. I appreciate this piece more than alot of pieces i have ever read. I am dying to see mroe pieces like this, I wish you good luck i making more pieces for people to enjoy.
This song spoke to my soul. It makes you think and try to put your life in perspective. I hope to read more things like this by you in the future.
This was pretty good, but i found a little bit of a hard time really getting what it was about. I would love to know if there is a story behind the lyrics it might make it easier to understand for me. Overall though I believe this could do well with a bit more clarity.
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