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LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: June 05
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: June 05
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Version 1
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I felt alone. I felt like I had nobody. My heart has suffered countless emotional abuse disgused by the words of love. I started to learn and often I drempt. My dreams were full of simplicity. Only one thing consisted in my hopes. Find The One. Then one day my bleeding heart began to beat once again. I found him. His touch sent my body into shock, this moist lips touching mine stopped my breathing. It came to the point where I would die without hearing the melody of voice, his breath in my ea...
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I looked into his beautiful green eyes. Those very eyes that send chills down my spine, and make my breath stop. He wrapped his arms around me and hugged me close. After a few minutes, he pulled me away and looked at me meaningfully, making me loose my balence. "Beth, I love you," he breathed deeply. My head began to spin as I slowly leaned forward and kissed his collar bone. "I love you too Robert." I smiled slighty. Most people aren't lucky enough to find a soul mate, a life long companion...
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I looked into his beautiful green eyes. Those very eyes that send chills down my spine, and make my breath stop. He wrapped his arms around me and hugged me close. After a few minutes, he pulled me away and looked at me meaningfully, making me loose my balence. "Beth, I love you," he breathed deeply. My head began to spin as I slowly leaned forward and kissed his collar bone. "I love you too Robert." I smiled slighty. Most people aren't lucky enough to find a soul mate, a life long companion...
Version 1
37 Reviews
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I've been dealt a bad hand of cards and now I'm bluffing to fool the world.
Version 1
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hold me in your arms and whisper in my ear tell me that you love me what i want to hear look into my eyes look deep into my heart give me that smile say we'll never be apart let me be the one who cant stop your smiles the one who makes you feel like you havent in a while let this be the time your with me forever adn you whisper in my ear were finally together
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i really like this poem. you do a good job of capturing the heartache somebody goes through watching somebody else destroy their own life by cutting themself. i have a friend who did the same exact thing, and acted the same way so i can definately relate, and that i can relate, make this a great poem. you should look into getting it published. it might be able to open teens eyes a little more.
well i looked for the off parts but it didnt seem off to me at all. i think for it being a rhyming poem it doesnt seem forced at all its just natural. i think you have a good idea of what to write about for a poem. and you portray being sad and alone on valentines day. and how you wish that you had that special someone that is with someone else for your own...its pretty nice.
wow. that was really good. i think that you really know how to make emotion known in a poem which is hard because all it is is words on a computer screen. I can tell very well how much you love this guy. I think you did an extremely good job!
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