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AGE: 28
LAST LOGIN: May 26

Gosh, what should I say…Well, I’m a recent graduate from the University of Tennessee at Chattanooga with a B.A. in English and American Language and Literature with my concentration in writing. I’ve probably been putting my hopes, fears, my personal pedagogy in tattered college-ruled notebooks, journals and letters to my mama or cousin for about 15 years now. Recently, the strong desire to become a teacher has overtaken me so, that’s what is most important to me now. For most of my undergraduate career, I wrote for 3 reasons: because it was a requirement for the degree, it was the best outlet to truly express how I was feeling and because I wanted to get better at it. Now that I’ve got the degree, I suppose I write or blog simply for r…

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Poetry / When Love Calls
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I realized that I could never have things the way I wanted them. The stark reality assaulted my being, smacked me in the face, twisted my arms, and pulled my hair. I tried to fight back, scream, even cry out for help but found it useless… Love had taken a hold of me, shook my senses loose and left me limp, lifeless, emotionally exposed. But I liked it. I craved it. I wanted to overdose on it. Bathe myself in it as if it were a hot bath of lavender and soothing salts. It’s left me Intoxicated,...
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It took a song to make her remember his smile Those full lips slightly curved at the corners of his dark chocolate mouth A smile that reduced her to the shy, round faced, giggly girl she used to be Her deep brown eyes that wildly penetrated the sun Disappeared with his presence In a freshly starched blue linen dress She was nervous and highly strung Her words were held hostage How a slight embrace… Perhaps a hand that gently rested on the small of her back Just a moderate display of affection...
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Spike Lee’s 1988 film School Daze offers commentary on a series of self-identity issues prevalent in the African American community—prejudice amongst African Americans based on skin color, the middle-class college students vs. the working-class community that surrounds the college campus, and the purpose of historically black colleges and universities (HBCU) in an integrated society. School Daze delves into another issue (an issue that resounds throughout the film) of the individual’s search ...
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Non-fiction / Ms. Bonnie
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Ms. Bonnie, a friend of the family that I have known for quite sometime, had just retired from twenty years of “selling the goods.” She is a nice woman, pretty and intelligent. She graduated from Duke University with a Bachelor of Science in pharmacology. She had always talked about her “other life” openly with my mama and those who know her intimately and I wondered if she would talk to me. The first time I met Ms. Bonnie, I knew what she did for a living. It wasn’t because she dressed in fi...
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Broad shoulders Cocoa buttered, dark chocolate skin Large hands, roughest softness ever felt on my face Could reach into the sky And grab the sun plus two clouds With the strength of fifty men plus one Can fling that baby right back and Turn sun into moon And clouds into blankets of stars folded neatly with darkness This man is the man among men Gives one hundred and ten percent and nothing less Knows where he's been Has visions of where he wants to be Near me, I hope
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Short Story / Lucifer and the Leper
After the first hint of racism, I had the mind to stop reading. Curiosity won and I continued, wanting to know what would happen next. "I never deal in stereotypes", the man says to us readers but, every inch of this man's being is consumed by stereotypes-from the way he views the Arabs to Blacks. Reading some of his comments and seeing the way the character thought was, I'll admit, scary, at some times. I'm a firm believer that the things we write about shed light on or are windows people ca...
Poetry / Gray Spring
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I enjoyed this piece because of the subject matter mostly. If anyone's ever imagined what it's like for a stripper, what may be going through their minds about their choosen profession, well, you've done a great job of giving us some insight. The beginning did give me flashes of scenes from "Playa's Club"; Diamond was dress in the same color as Pilar I think and she may have danced to "Seems Like You're Ready" (so how many times have you seen that movie :-)). It's difficult for me to comment ...
What I like Most about the piece, or my favorite line, the one that truly made me think, "Is a guy really capable of so much feeling?" was "she is there, seared into the dark canvas of his memory." The imagination that permeates through your choice of words is relentless. Rarely do I continue to read pieces that seem to visit a dark place; let's face it here-this guy's got some serious problems if he's lusting, dreaming, adoring a poster hung up in his room, so much that it's interupted his e...
Short Story / Desire
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