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AGE:
38
LOC: United States
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: December 23
LOC: United States
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: December 23
Hello. My name is Terry. I have been writing fiction since I took a class in college 18 years ago. And I’ve been writing ever since. I’ve not been published for fiction -- journalism yes -- but I have aspirations. That’s the reason I joined to have an outlet to write and recieve constructive criticism. My writing -- as most of the writing I like -- tends to focus on characters and their relationships. So I look forward to good times here.
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I’d like to preface this by saying that I am not a holy roller, and therefore don’t want this to be taken as from someone who’s holier-than-thou in mentality. Please know that I say this as a sinner come in from the world trying to ‘straighten up and fly right’. I haven’t quite succeeded but I’m blessed. Blessed to know a God who loves me enough to be patient with me which is more than I can say for most of the ‘Christians’ I’ve been encountering. Coming from a place in life of having messed ...
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It took me a minute to get what you were saying - and of course it's that I think I got it -- but I agree. And I like. Very good.
Love it. The story moves and flows at a pace that grabs hold and keeps your attention. This is something that could definitely sell -- from what I'm reading so far. I think there's enough intertest in the war and how the troops are coping to warrant any number of books that puts a human face on it. So, you're on the right track. But there were a few things I saw. At the end of page one, you should try incorporating the descriptive exposition into the dialogue on page two. ... And on page six,...
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