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AGE:
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LOC: United States
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 18
LOC: United States
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 18
Hey, I’m an anime fan who loves to write. Simply that. I write fantasy since there’s no “anime” or “manga” category in writing. I’ve been writing since I was about 14 and I’m loads better than I was then (thank God!). Even so, I know I still make mistakes and enjoy constructive critisism. Thanks. Hope you like my stuff!
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Descent of Stars Chapter 3 There was a chilling wind today on the road to town. Suta walked along the dirt path quietly contemplating what had been going on in the past few days. It had only been about an hour along the walk and he’d spent it all worrying whether or not Mikomi was okay. There were butterflies fluttering around near his face now. He wondered what she would say if she’d seen them. Suta smiled and lifted the brim of his shade hat to let some sunlight hit his face. The hat slid d...
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Descent of Stars He walked down the lush hills of Silia. They were a sea of greens with specks of red and yellow for the occasional flower. The sea rolled and swayed, but no waves appeared. He wore a katana on his side and a slight grin on his young face. Suta was nineteen years old and had just bought a new sword. He sprinted as fast as his legs could carry him to the training spot which resided in a flat area a small ways ahead of him. The midday sun warmed the grass and the young man's bar...
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The Life of Higesu The sun rose as the morning awoke. Suta still stood outside with his katana poised in the stance of an after-strike. Sweat dripped from his brow. He had pulled an all-nighter with his training. The rays of the sun poking over the trees in the distance stung his pupils. As he raised his hand to his face to block them out he laughed at his own antics. He carefully slid the back of the blade down the top of the sheath and then cleanly into the scabbard. He walked back into his...
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Descent of Stars He walked down the lush hills of Silia. They were a sea of greens with specks of red and yellow for the occasional flower. The sea rolled and swayed, but no waves appeared. He wore a katana on his side and a slight grin on his young face. He was about nineteen years old and had just bought a new sword. He sprinted as fast as his legs could carry him to his training spot. He felt the midday sun on his face and the warmth of the grass on his bare feet. He stopped just for a mom...
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That's really talented right there! To be totally honest I'm not sure I can interpret this poem yet. There's a lot of brilliant imagery in there that makes me see a really epic scene. Sorry for my incompetence if the meaning and subject is obvious I'm a bit off today, but I can tell brilliance when I see it and this one is kicking me in the face. I love it, I keep seeing the clouds splitting with rain and lighning in my head now. Your poem looks really cool if you know what I mean. Cool but d...
Um...wow. I can't think of any other way to put it. That seemed like the most random jumbled thought process I can imagine anyone percieving. I take that back, random sounds unfair. The process was actually realistic to when a person's mind is wandering. There's a lot to go through when reading this and I honestly couldn't explain this story to anyone except that there were people doing drugs deliberately and accidentally, they TRIED to talk about something to do with cats, and the narrator e...
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