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LOC: Nottingham, PA
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LAST LOGIN: February 06
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Blood and tears running down her cheeks She's just a walking tragedy Her lips quiver and her body shakes Coldly, he stares at her, with no shame Badly bruised and forever scarred Slowly breaking her fragile heart But now her torture ends tonight She's packing her bags, taking flight He screams as she walks out the door But that doesn't matter anymore
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There was a horrid shriek as the beast sank into her flesh. His vile eyes tearing into my soul as I fought him off. I was able to save her, but the wound was deep and bled profusely. Tears flowed freely from her deep gray eyes and she grasped her arm in pain. "We have to keep moving!" I commanded as I grabbed hold of her good arm. We ran as fast as we could, Natalie sobbing all the way. I allowed us a moment's rest at the bottom of a short cliff, panting heavily as I examined her wound. The ...
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My heart suddenly swelled and grew, Laying eyes on the beauty I never knew. Flowing locks of golden hair, Whisp around her vacant stare. Her eyes were blue and full of fright, As I layed her to rest tonight. Still hearing every wretched scream, As she fulfilled my wicked dreams. Cut up and broken on the floor, I find her more beautiful than before. And as I leave and close the door, She lays there sleeping, evermore.
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Bloodshot Eyes Stifled Cries Cold Blue Lips Twisted Hips Vacant Mind Eyes Go Blind How She Fell I'll Never Tell
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Soul is bleeding. Heart’s receding. Pain in eyes, Mixed with lies. Tears drip slow, As blood flows. As you cry, I slowly die. I told you so, You should've known Was my pain All in vain?
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Some of the best haikus I've seen in a long time. The raw emotion is powerful, and is definately conveyed as it should in such a limited amount of words.
It's a nice free verse piece, and it is something that many people can relate to. Many times it can seem like you have no voice or meaning, and in this poem it truly expresses that hopeless feeling.
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Haha, I love this poem. I happen to have a similar problem myself, and it was nice little read. It's sad that people are so occupied on appearance, but a little time online can make you feel better. :)
Not bad, it doesn't flow so well in some spots when reading it, but I'm sure it would sound better when sung. It has potential, but I think it's only so-so, it needs some touching up.
Haha, I love it. All are artists are tuly mad when it gets down to it, aren't they?
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