Miscast's profile
AGE:
18
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 05
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 05
Writing has been my life and passion since 4th grade. Of all my artistic hobbies, I find writing to be the most free. You are the God of the future—any and all.
When I’m not writing, I’m customizing ball-joint dolls, listening to music, and taking photos. Photography is my other love.
I was definitely made for a past era… perhaps the 70s or 80s? I mean, I’m nerd enough to collect punk records.
Throughout the years, one of my biggest goals is to write a book.
When I’m not struggling with my novel, I’m punching out poems and a few short stories.
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I was pretty much done with my skepticism—until he told me he drank. Last time there was talk of this, he was telling me he stopped it all—pills, alcohol, smoking—if it gave our relationship a chance. That was nearly two years ago… and it never crossed my mind. Not until he brought it up again over the phone. He had a drink… and felt guilty. He knew I didn’t like him doing it, neither did his dad… but when did he ever care about what his dad thought? Who was he now? A changed man, apparently…...
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Why simple? Simple is easy... Easy to hide behind, Easy to lie for. It is my favorite decoy.
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His accent was thick, his English was thin He said, "Give me piece." We laughed 48 years over our heads and told him Hippies were extinct. He winced as the Americans devoured the last of the cake.
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I fit the bill— spurts of intensity illusions frigid fears trapped steam Now where’s my fame?
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I'm not (I am) good enough.
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Very hopeful and inspiring... gives the future the optimism that I never gave it. It gives the future and your own potential a chance to fulfill your own dreams. Very nice, though it seems very list-like to me, but it does qualify as a memoir; its just borderline, in my opinion. I hope that I can think like this one day; that I've got something great just waiting to transfer itself from my fingers to Word. It takes a lot more effort for true optimism! Good luck.
I love the humor in this... I can feel Hemingway's voice coming out of this, too... which is rare. I've read and reviewed dozens of these over the days, and this is the only one I can say possesses that. I wager that is both good and bad. I love that your 'muse' is given life, even though it may or may not actually be living. I also like the use of the semi-colon instead of the comma; more pause, more impact. Good luck.
I love this so much... very bold and simple. Although the words and everything are so simple and it could be considered as borderline amateur, this does say a lot, no matter what others say. I love the tangible feel of paper and pen; I use both and my computer about the same. Both are awesome.
I like the despair of this, but I do think it is a bit too cliché and un-memoir-like. Its a very good attempt, but I think if you added a bit more mystery or something less general, it would be more personalized to you. (;
I love this... sounds like a wad of dark satire to me. It sounds like a bit of butter stretched over too much bread, or something old and worn out. I also loved how 'muse' as used as if it were a person or something living, even though it may not be.
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