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AGE:
16
LOC: Portland, OR
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: January 07
LOC: Portland, OR
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: January 07
I’m a Sophmore.
I’m mixed into one of the most dramatic times in one’s life.
And I promised myself that when I become a Freshman not to stir the shit pot and to stay out of said drama.
My attempts at success though, have failed epically.
Which leads me to only one conclusion as to why I can’t seem to stay out of it all;
STUPID TEENAGE HORMONES.
<3
I’m Mika.
I’m a lesbian.
I’m 16.
And chyeah! ^^
This’ll be fun.
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I always watch you. I watch your breath escape after each slow, forced drink; when your eyes squint in pain but your mouth forms a rare, beautiful, smile. I watch how your fingers curl gracefully around your knife, ready and willing for the alcohol to ebb away slowly. I watch as your tears flow freely from where they were born to where they will end on your cold, silvery skin. It's not that I lov...
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Thousands of voices sing in silence. A choir of strength, a song of triumph, a golden thread that's stretched across bind us tightly. Join us. Quiet the world. Through our eyes, you are seeing! Lets show how our silence is deafening.
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Beautiful, tough skin stitched to Mother nature's wonders, withering away with the passing of time. Crispy, fragile leaves fall in dark red and orange clusters, brushed lightly with a kiss of regret. Thick, golden light litters the world with delight, causing time to be at a stand still. Energetic flames decorate trees surrounding sweetly scented air, burning pieces of you. Sharp, cracking screams rise along with the heat of the flames, masking terror on nameless faces. Disinigrating leaves s...
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Silent trees give away, lead to silent screams. Think so silently. Dream so much nothing. Stare at me and think of me, I need it. With no one there, with nothing owned, with silence following, and darkness crawling, find me.
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A thousand voices sing in silence. A choir of strength, a song of triumpth, a golden thread tha's strechted accross hold it tightly. Join us. Quiet the world watch as thousands aren't speaking, lets show how our silence is deafening.
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Kind of sad, but in a haunting way. It makes you think about your life and how you expect to live it, and how that might work out in the end. Some of the sentances you wrote were unclear, and that may just be because of the description, but I put them on here anyways for your referance, "A reflection of her posed a picture on canvas," and this one, "from the inside and palm to canvas could spread emotions that could,". I'd suggest that this sentance here, "overflows daily, because she has her...
This was very interesting to me, it felt as if I was reading a book! This is a publishable story so far, just don't go and ruin it in the next chapters! Ha! The only part I'd suggest clarifying is when Agrin and Aodhan were being attacked by that invisible force, because when the horse gets drawn closer to that other guy I get thrown off by everything else that's happening, and it's hard to understand it all at once. In the second paragraph of chapter one there's an error, "She stared at hem,...
This is a thinker piece. And because of that it makes me think about things, duh, which is really hard to get me to do. The only thing I'd suggest is changing the ending sentance to make it more clear as to what you're saying. Like, is there supposed to be emphasis on 'that', "now THAT is heaven," or is it supposed to say something else? It's a little unclear on how that sentance is presented. Good job though! = ]
This is a really good peace, one of the best poetry pieces I've read. The only thing I'd suggest is that the ending stanza seems sort of rushed, amd unfinished. Kind of unclear. I don't understand, "In your grand journey down the pothole, Just stretch the towing rope. Then stop,". I have no idea where it came from, it's just sort of random. All in all it's great though! Goin' on my favorites.
I like it a lot, but some of the peice has too much great vocabulary. It can be kind of over-whelming, like in the begginning I felt I was being tackled by huge words; some descriptive and some not. There's some grammerical errors such as, "The main restaurant, the Bellarde Inn had the white Christmas lights all over it," but they happen to us all. The problen with this is that there should be a comma after 'Inn' because the name of the Inn could be taken out of the sentance, it's un-needed i...
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