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AGE: 35
LOC: Chicago, IL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 01

BORN DIVINE AND DOOMED TO DUST…  FULL OF EXISTENTIAL GLOOMBUT FOREVER SEEKING THE FIRE I SEE IN CERTAIN OTHERS THAT MAKES THEM BEAUTIFUL TO ME.

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MELTING SNOW DRIBBLES DOWN THE BACKS OF OLD BUILDINGS ANOTHER YEAR GONE HEARTS AND MINDS - RICH SOIL LIFE CUTS DEEP THE TENDER EARTH DARKNESS FLOWERS THERE COLD MISTS AND SHADOW CREEP DOWN FROM GREY APRIL SKIES MY HEART WAITS TO BLOOM RAIN'S TINY FINGERS SUMMON GHOSTS OF OTHER HANDS WITH COLDER TOUCHES
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / from my journal, January 30, 1997
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From my journal, January 30, 1997 ...Outside my window all is black. Only a sprinkling of distant street lamps break the monotony of dark. My reflection in the glass pane leaves me with a strange dream-like feeling. The man looking back at me might be called handsome despite a haunted, haggard look. He seems unhappy and has a face so somber it's hard to imagine him smiling. Stationary, notes and letters are spread out in disarray across the desk where he sits, pen in hand. His hair hangs loos...
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Short Story / Coffee
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COFFEE The girl at the counter has beautiful eyes. They remind me of something Jason wrote. Part of a poem he sent somewhere to be published. They turned it down. "...Her ferocious eyes, Like tiger lilies, Glorious and hungry, Warm with endless summer..." That's Jason. Up to his ass in endlesslies but couldn't change a flat tire if his life depended on it. He sits at the shaky table in the corner. It's always the corner for us. From there you can see the whole room. His eyes are on the board ...
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Poetry / Sickle Moon
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You rise Pale and alone Your starry tears Thrown across the night Sickle Moon Razor Moon You dream of cutting heaven From the sky
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Haiku/Senryu / First Entries
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The skin is broken Hungry now, you bite harder seeking the center
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Poetry / Ageism
i feel for both the speaker and the spoken against in this piece, because both points of view seem valid... the poet seem to be in sync with the youthful point of view, but understands enough of the human condition to know that her perspective may change with time, because she puts herself in the position of the narrow minded oldster with some amount of accuracy. I detect a bit of righteous anger in the poem though and think it may come off better if it acknowledges the humaness of both persp...
Poetry / A Final Kiss
I really liked the theme of this poem... but I'm a sucker for parting moments. Some of the poetic imagery did seem a little hollow to me... word choices seemed to be made less for their content than for their "poetic sound" and came across as posed. examples ... My fountain sings of yesterday’s memories For any form of love is gold, of that I know. another problem i see is that the imagery seems fragmented... various unrelated metaphors and images scatter the attention of the reader instead o...
Lyrics / Carrie Zsma
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